At 4/11/10 10:56 AM, InTheBlue wrote:
I must admit, that newest piece of yours is amazing. Compared to your older pieces, it blows them away. Keep doing tour art like that, and there'll be some tough competition in the NG Doubles 10!
Thanks - it's my third try at lineless. I'll have to keep this up, then. Really, I thought I was doing a horrible attempt at art. Guess the only way to go is up.
:I like it, but I have a few problems with it:
Since it's for the NDC collab, i think the lines in the background should be more visible.
this is easy to fix, if you did it in photoshop, you can just copy the layer with the lined paper on it, place it on the top of all the other layers, and play around with layer behaviors and opacity!
:The other thing is that the guy in the middle looks a bit blurred.
This is not as easy to fix, but really, you should just increase the contrast between the colors, and use a bit harder brush!
:Good work though!
Well, theres my problem right there. I used an airbrush. This is now an official no-no. I'd go back and redo it, but it's kinda 1:30am. That, and I'm not sure I can resubmit. Well, I probably can, so there's no excuse. I guess I'll sharpen it subtly enough for it to have the appearance of something not representing a literal eyesore. Thanks for pointing that out.
Probably would have done squat about it, otherwise.