looking for some reviews/feedback.

[Happy3kmed]

so far it's pretty much dead in the water. Click the link >> http://happy3kmed.newgrounds.com/ and leave a review for any of the art on there. Example posted on 'ere, the rest are on my page.

[Decky]

Good.
Could have done with more detail.
Post more and I could give a better review.

[Happy3kmed]

ill just post 'em all here then...

[Happy3kmed]

and the rest...

[Decky]

If the shade of red was abit darker on his face and hair, only a tiny bit. It would have been better. But it is a good piece.

[Happy3kmed]

and a first attempt at a comic strip...

[ornery]

The ones with the colored background work better than the first one with all white. White is a viable color as a background, when it says something besides "I was to lazy to put anything in"

The colored ones are more successful because the effect of mixing figure and ground is more apparent when the background bleeds into the figure but doesn't make it feel incomplete. As a general compositional rule line work will tend to look unfinished on a pure white ground if the ground is allowed to overtake some edges and enter the figure.

[wesmeadow]

At 4/3/10 01:43 PM, Happy3kmed wrote: and the rest...

I do not understand, you have star wars and batman combined here. Is there a specific statement or is this just a general "out there to be out there" work?

[Decky]

At 4/3/10 01:50 PM, Happy3kmed wrote: and a first attempt at a comic strip...

I don't usally like comic strips in the art forum but this one works well.

[Happy3kmed]

At 4/3/10 03:11 PM, ornery wrote: The ones with the colored background work better than the first one with all white. White is a viable color as a background, when it says something besides "I was to lazy to put anything in"

The colored ones are more successful because the effect of mixing figure and ground is more apparent when the background bleeds into the figure but doesn't make it feel incomplete. As a general compositional rule line work will tend to look unfinished on a pure white ground if the ground is allowed to overtake some edges and enter the figure.

ya i know what you mean, but since both characters have white skin there was never another option in my mind. I usually start out with a base color and go from there, and this time i picked white, but i do agree it gives it a more incomplete look. Had a look at some of your art by the way, really amazing.

[Happy3kmed]

At 4/3/10 03:36 PM, wesmeadow wrote:

At 4/3/10 01:43 PM, Happy3kmed wrote: and the rest...

I do not understand, you have star wars and batman combined here. Is there a specific statement or is this just a general "out there to be out there" work?

would you believe me if i said there was meaning behind it? neither would I.

[Happy3kmed]

At 4/3/10 03:57 PM, Decky1991 wrote:

At 4/3/10 01:50 PM, Happy3kmed wrote: and a first attempt at a comic strip...

I don't usally like comic strips in the art forum but this one works well.

thanks

[Happy3kmed]

a new one. "The American Reaction"

[VanillaBeast]

Maybe work with line weight, it just looks to plain, there's no style there. You can be as simple as you want, and that's fine, but there's a fine line between simple and grade school.