the in game art

[scuddle666]

It was suggested that i get opinions from some of the artists on NG. So first heres what i put in the post for i put in the flash section.

GAME LINK
I'm making a new game, I don't have a title yet, I have the story line and whatnot, but this is just what i have so far, theres no opening cut scene, menu, save-load, or many other planned features yet, It's mainly just the first section, with the tutorial guy, and basically just a free roam spot. and then theres the first section where you actually fight zombies, NOTE: there will be several different zombies, I only have 1 done so far, and this is just a preview.
I'm looking for POSITIVE feedback, and i hope you enjoy what i have so far.
controls
A and D - walk
SPACE - perform ACTION (talk, take, open, etc)
SHIFT - enter VIEW mode (use mouse to adjust the aim)
MOUSE - aim your gun
CLICK - shoot
1,2,3 - switch weapons
CONTROL - drink water
P - pause

There will be more actions, and whatnot, this is a rough draft of what to come. In this preview you get to use the first 3 guns, handgun, shotgun, uzi. (NOTE: the uzi will have a rapid fire function later on)
all other instructions will be given when you talk to the guy that looks like the fonz.
So enjoy what i have, give me feedback, and yea.
btw - betcha can't guess what 3 games, movie, tv shows, and or comics inspired this game. and point out what they inspired.
so enjoy it and yea heres the link
GAME LINK

I'm looking for feedback on the in game art. I thought it was pretty nice, But of course i made it, so of course i think that, and my sister is impossible to impress, so i look to you NG users, what do you think? I don't mind some criticism, up until a point, don't just be a dick about it.
Thanks for your time, Hopefully this will eliminate my bad NG rep i got when it's finished.

[LegolaSS]

you might want to have a look at this first...

The art fourm rules

[scuddle666]

At 3/31/10 01:12 PM, LegolaSS wrote: you might want to have a look at this first...

The art fourm rules

I read it completely, What am i missing here? I'm asking for someone to tell me what you think about the in game "ART" i simply put the other stuff so stupid questions wouldn't be asked about stuff i covered in the actual forum for it. this thread is just so i can find out what people think about my in game "ART" so aside from that, i don't get what you mean by read the forum rules, what am i missing?

[tootall619]

not sure your in the right forum buddy

[scuddle666]

At 3/31/10 01:20 PM, tootall619 wrote: not sure your in the right forum buddy

I'm simply asking for a review of the art, I already have this on the flash section, but i'm trying to get a reviews on the art from artists here in the art forum, The other info is only there because it's mainly needed for the game.

[thies]

At 3/31/10 01:18 PM, scuddle666 wrote:

At 3/31/10 01:12 PM, LegolaSS wrote: you might want to have a look at this first...

The art fourm rules

I read it completely, What am i missing here?

You have to start a topic with a picture included.

[scuddle666]

At 3/31/10 01:33 PM, TieSeiT wrote:

At 3/31/10 01:18 PM, scuddle666 wrote:

At 3/31/10 01:12 PM, LegolaSS wrote: you might want to have a look at this first...

The art fourm rules

I read it completely, What am i missing here?

You have to start a topic with a picture included.

OH, that......forgot about that..... why doesn't NG let you edit your post

[bigjonny13]

The controls are kinda broken at this point. When you press shift to look around, you can't walk afterwords....
But anyways, about the art, because that was your question. It's simple, and a little bland. Also, the chibi style is not only overused at times, but it really doesn't suit the style of game you're going with. I'm guessing it's supposed to be a zombie survival what with those loud screams in the audio, but the chibi style makes it looks really goofy. Also, the front leg has a knee joint, but the back leg doesn't.

[Ashman]

may want to change the running animation, it doesnt look natural, the art style, yeah its ok i guess, could do with a bit of cleanup, less use of blur, etc, looks influenced by metal gear for the character, and metal slug for the gameplay, another fun thing i found, normally theres only 10 zombies on the second screen, it flipped out and i got gangraped by about 50, i lasted about 5 seconds, second time it was fine though

[ReNaeNae]

At 3/31/10 01:33 PM, TieSeiT wrote: You have to start a topic with a picture included.

RULES! If you want critiques on the art... post the freakin' art!