What do ya think?

[KirtTheGreat]

Hey this was one of the first times I tried to draw something that is more realistic than the cartoony style I usually draw with. What do you guys think?

[KirtTheGreat]

Sorry if the picture looks a little crappy. My cameras not the best for this... :D

[Daverom]

The anatomy on the hand isn't bad, but I'm not sure that that is, is that smoke?
Also it could do without the scribbley bits

[KirtTheGreat]

yeah, I wasn't really sure for the background and that was smoke... thanks for the reply! :D

[Kinsei]

At 3/30/10 07:35 PM, KirtTheGreat wrote: Hey this was one of the first times I tried to draw something that is more realistic than the cartoony style I usually draw with. What do you guys think?

The hand is ok, could use some more dramatic spacing in the fingers and some shading, you got some but I think it would help to push out the light and dark some more.
also, don't take this the wrong way, but it looks like there is a turd coming out of his fingers...

I have had smoke effects be called fur on one of my pieces as well :P so it's no biggie

it's an odd piece and I would like you to try another crack at it. effects like realistic smoke are kind of hard so I won't hold that against you.

Also bigger please :P

[KirtTheGreat]

Haha that's exactly what my friend said about the smoke. Almost word for word! :P I will try it again though. Thanks!

[KirtTheGreat]

Hey I fixed it up a little. Hopefully the smoke doesn't look like a turd :P