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4.16 / 5.00 16,668 ViewsCritque please
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Mar. 27th, 2010 @ 11:50 PM
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Well, I made this flash as a commercial for my new school. it took about a week of 50 minute blocks. That's sort of a bit for this low quality, but please tell me what you think. Positive and negative critique is welcome.
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Mar. 29th, 2010 @ 02:32 AM
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Well, I guess it is ok? Nothing really impressive though.
You really have to work on your drawing.
I think of every possibility and try every one of them before seeking for help.
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Mar. 29th, 2010 @ 06:31 AM
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Idk what you want me to compare it to. Compared to a lot of average kids that go to high school and use Flash once in a while... well, then its average. Compared to ppl who have a passion for drawing in flash, its pretty much garbage. It's just whatever spectrum you want it to be looked at.
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Mar. 29th, 2010 @ 07:09 AM
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I like how the woman moonwalks sideways.
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Mar. 29th, 2010 @ 11:35 AM
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The green shirt that he (?) is wearing reads "2012" when he walks past.
Then when he comes into the frame again it reads "2011". Awful.
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Mar. 29th, 2010 @ 11:36 AM
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At 3/29/10 07:09 AM, Deadclever23 wrote: I like how the woman moonwalks sideways.
It was a woman? But the voice...
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Mar. 29th, 2010 @ 04:47 PM
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My artwork in flash can be better, I just used the school's mouse, plus I made it quickly. Thanks for that much though. Also, I didn't really say this, but I wanted to know if it was an improvement from my previous flashes.
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Mar. 30th, 2010 @ 01:35 AM
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At 3/29/10 11:36 AM, PabMo wrote:At 3/29/10 07:09 AM, Deadclever23 wrote: I like how the woman moonwalks sideways.It was a woman? But the voice...
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Mar. 30th, 2010 @ 02:14 AM
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The background and final text needs to be fixed up. I think it would be easier having them both on a flat plane instead of an awkward slant.
