Well, I made this flash as a commercial for my new school. it took about a week of 50 minute blocks. That's sort of a bit for this low quality, but please tell me what you think. Positive and negative critique is welcome.
Well, I guess it is ok? Nothing really impressive though.
You really have to work on your drawing.
I think of every possibility and try every one of them before seeking for help.
Idk what you want me to compare it to. Compared to a lot of average kids that go to high school and use Flash once in a while... well, then its average. Compared to ppl who have a passion for drawing in flash, its pretty much garbage. It's just whatever spectrum you want it to be looked at.
"To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all."
- Oscar Wilde
My artwork in flash can be better, I just used the school's mouse, plus I made it quickly. Thanks for that much though. Also, I didn't really say this, but I wanted to know if it was an improvement from my previous flashes.
At 3/29/10 11:36 AM, PabMo wrote:At 3/29/10 07:09 AM, Deadclever23 wrote: I like how the woman moonwalks sideways.It was a woman? But the voice...
Trap
True story...
The background and final text needs to be fixed up. I think it would be easier having them both on a flat plane instead of an awkward slant.
