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Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz

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Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-22 21:09:43 Reply

Topic: Nightingale (Satire)

I am forcing you guys to write a satire...try your best!

1 day to write
2 days thereafter to vote


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-23 02:58:34 Reply

tis be first again. i had to look up nightingale and satire. lol

///birdbrain///

oh you fly;
that must be fun

you live in the same house as a bum

you eat worms;
oh that's so yum

that reside in the earth
the grime and the grum

life of leisure;
aerobatic features

oh;
such a wonderful creature

summer, fall
you leave in cold seasons

but we call you a bird brain for a reason

lol idk...i kinda felt bad talking about a bird like that for no reason.


Oh yeaaa

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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-23 20:15:03 Reply

Not my greatest form, but it gets the point across...

Obama

Oh, nightingale, sweet nightingale
Can you fetch me my ale?
For the white house gets lonely
And for Uranus, I want to set sale
Yes, birdie, I'm drunk, so very drunk
So very drunk and pale
But it's hard to destroy a nation
Without drinking a gallon of ale
So with a beer, health care
Is passed, oh do I dare,
Even though it's not fair?
Oh, but I don't care.
It's time to turn the
Once great US into a
Nightmare


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Than teach 10,000 stars how not to dance.
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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-23 20:37:42 Reply

I vote Shortmonkey


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-23 22:42:16 Reply

Short monkey gets my vote. It was more satirical, or if anything it made me crack a smile


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-25 21:16:33 Reply

ShortMonkey's got my vote. It struck me as the most satirical.


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-25 21:18:00 Reply

I'm going to extend this battle by two days in order to get more votes in.


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-25 21:18:08 Reply

My bad. I didn't know it was over, heh.


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-28 12:29:02 Reply

Great job new guy! /rubs hair into a tangled mess


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-29 21:21:36 Reply

I vote Ponz, it was my kinda poem...


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-03-29 21:58:35 Reply

At 3/29/10 09:21 PM, SuperGerbal wrote: I vote Ponz, it was my kinda poem...

Battle has ended. Sorry!


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Response to Shortmonkey v Dubbi v Ponz 2010-04-03 19:55:28 Reply

At 3/25/10 09:03 PM, ShortMonkey wrote: Well, that's it. It's been 2 days. I would have liked to see more votes but anyway, looks like I win, 2-0-0.

Dubbi, your poem really had nothing to do with the aim of this contest, but it was a good poem with a good message.

Eh, I don't really understand satire. I thought I was satiring Obama.... Anyway, good battle!


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