animation advice :)

[Huyu]

hiya all nice people who live somewhere, i want to know what you guys think of my idea, like you can: comment my character design, help me with what i should do next, tell me if it has ANY potentional at all and such :D

link --> http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/c49e 5f3031496e33962bae6316a099b0

[KittehAnims]

I think it's a very interesting idea, but you would have to put a lot more work in to make as interesting as it could be. Both characters looked very funny though :D

[JKR]

It's a good start. I really like the character design of the first, larger guy. The other seems very plain by comparison, so maybe tweak it to be more extreme like the first. In the extreme long shots (where they are just shadows) you need a horizon line to anchor them to the stage. Just a simple line in the back will do, separating ground and sky.

Keep at it!

[JsZooi]

i doesn't look like you've put lots of affort in it. if you try to make it a lttl smoother i think it should be alot better.