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Spac3case916
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Morph 2010-03-11 20:16:18 Reply

this is a bird to missile morph.
it is just a WIP

tell me what you think.
thank you
-Joe


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Response to Morph 2010-03-11 20:42:27 Reply

At 3/11/10 08:16 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: this is a bird to missile morph.
it is just a WIP

tell me what you think.
thank you
-Joe

wow
im so sorry.
that was dumb
here's the link:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/ffb2 a649a53f65fb8698efedf802af7c


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Response to Morph 2010-03-11 21:01:58 Reply

It's pretty good for a start.. Obviously very rough, but still. I wouldn't say it's that imaginative though.. and without the details anyway just pretty easy to replicate..

But it's a good start.


In the toaster

A bit too long

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Response to Morph 2010-03-11 21:13:28 Reply

At 3/11/10 09:01 PM, SlightlyToasted wrote: It's pretty good for a start.. Obviously very rough, but still. I wouldn't say it's that imaginative though.. and without the details anyway just pretty easy to replicate..

But it's a good start.

thanks for your comment
but, what do you mean it's not very imaginative? have you seen it alot?
i would like to pretend that i am imaginative. But, if im not than im not : )


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Response to Morph 2010-03-12 02:39:57 Reply

Hmm, it's a bit bland, but I think it's because it stays still during the morph. It's flying through the air, so add some turbulence or make it wobble a bit?
Is it me or is it a bit slow, even when fully loaded?

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Response to Morph 2010-03-12 14:38:52 Reply

Think the wings should keep flapping for one or two more times, makes it feel a bit smoother so that it ain't a bird on one frame and on the next is a dead object.

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Response to Morph 2010-03-12 15:43:18 Reply

looking good :) but it seems a bit too rough, even for a sketch. You should also try adding a bit more motion to the flapping.

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Response to Morph 2010-03-12 21:29:57 Reply

At 3/11/10 08:42 PM, Spac3case916 wrote:
At 3/11/10 08:16 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: this is a bird to missile morph.
it is just a WIP

tell me what you think.
thank you
-Joe
wow
im so sorry.
that was dumb
here's the link:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/ffb2 a649a53f65fb8698efedf802af7c

I forgot to post the link before too...also on the work it looks good.


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Response to Morph 2010-03-13 01:30:38 Reply

At 3/12/10 02:38 PM, Magical-Arts wrote: Think the wings should keep flapping for one or two more times, makes it feel a bit smoother so that it ain't a bird on one frame and on the next is a dead object.

i totally agree : )
that was the next step.
actually the next next step.
very thoughtful critique thanks.


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Response to Morph 2010-03-13 09:06:01 Reply

It seems alright, maybe a little rough for sketch though.

Were you using a tablet?


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Response to Morph 2010-03-13 17:18:32 Reply

At 3/13/10 09:06 AM, Lorkas wrote: It seems alright, maybe a little rough for sketch though.

Were you using a tablet?

yeah : )
i found out if i dont do it super rough than a start to obsess about how it looks and no work gets done.

so super sloppy is actaully a good thing for me.


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