Tell me what you think!

[ThyGentleman]

Ok I was offered a little side job from a magician I know. He wants me to make a short cartoon about a migician doing funny stuff (He wants to put it on his website). I wanted to show you guys my ability with flash and what the cartoon is going to look like:

This is it

[Spac3case916]

it looks good so far.
the use of light is good.
and the lines are clean and clear.

[JordanD]

At 3/6/10 08:14 PM, ClassicWiseguy wrote: Ok I was offered a little side job from a magician I know. He wants me to make a short cartoon about a migician doing funny stuff (He wants to put it on his website). I wanted to show you guys my ability with flash and what the cartoon is going to look like:

This is it

Try experimenting with more movement in the arms and body, instead of just having his harm kinda wiggle and his body doesn't move.

Here's something i just whipped up in 5 minutes to show you an example of moving and getting the same sorta effect.

Also i'd reccomend working on your cape flowing, rather than 2 frames flipping back and forth, try actually following the outside curves of the cape as it blows to get a cool cape-blowing effect ^_^

[ThyGentleman]

Yeah I know what you mean! I was planning on remaking it and reposting it agian with some movement

[technoSprint]

The only thing that moved in the animation was the arm and the cape. So, thumbs down.

[ThyGentleman]

At 3/6/10 11:43 PM, technoSprint wrote: The only thing that moved in the animation was the arm and the cape. So, thumbs down.

So there was no energy ball and the hat dident have any effect just stayed the same? but I can clearly see that you would know because of all the wonderful work in your profile. I like how you have no picture or flash to show...pretty original

[ThyGentleman]

Also i'd reccomend working on your cape flowing, rather than 2 frames flipping back and forth, try actually following the outside curves of the cape as it blows to get a cool cape-blowing effect ^_^

Its 4 frames for the cape.

[JordanD]

At 3/7/10 07:28 PM, ClassicWiseguy wrote:

Also i'd reccomend working on your cape flowing, rather than 2 frames flipping back and forth, try actually following the outside curves of the cape as it blows to get a cool cape-blowing effect ^_^

Its 4 frames for the cape.

still didn't look too good, and don't make 2 threads for the same topic.