like this ?

[MelleE]

i was sitting there after playing dragon age origins and then i thought of james bond i will also be posting other pics her :D

[MelleE]

At 3/5/10 11:54 PM, MelleE wrote: i was sitting there after playing dragon age origins and then i thought of james bond i will also be posting other pics her :D

im just trying to get scouted :D lol tell me if you think i could

[Kinsei]

At 3/6/10 12:24 AM, MelleE wrote:

im just trying to get scouted :D lol tell me if you think i could

with this particular piece right here?
you got about a snowballs chance in hell

[TurkeyOnAStick]

At 3/6/10 06:33 AM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 3/6/10 12:24 AM, MelleE wrote: im just trying to get scouted :D lol tell me if you think i could

with this particular piece right here?
you got about a snowballs chance in hell

... ok.
EITHER people show that they're artists, and give some decent feedback and crit
OR I'll take it as flaming, and just ban you.

[bigjonny13]

James Bond looks very messy and sloppy, and appears to be hastily made.

[MelleE]

At 3/6/10 11:44 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: James Bond looks very messy and sloppy, and appears to be hastily made.

did you like the old man thoe?

[Ashman]

well they need some serious work, the old mans eye is seriously out of place compared to the rest, and james bond is too blocky for my liking

[Fifty-50]

Hmmmmm.... Seems you need to work on anatomy, shading( optional ) and the way you make you lines. You need to be mor serious if you wanna get better. PRACTICE! It helps.

[MelleE]

At 3/6/10 05:57 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: Hmmmmm.... Seems you need to work on anatomy, shading( optional ) and the way you make you lines. You need to be mor serious if you wanna get better. PRACTICE! It helps.

thanks for the critisism unlike other people :D

[bloo-apple]

At 3/7/10 12:39 PM, MelleE wrote:

thanks for the critisism unlike other people :D

All I see that's wrong with it, are the gun looks kinda awkward, and the eyes aren't aligned correctly. It seems that you were trying to give it a 7 shape and it just doesn't seem to fit the shape. The cigarette's brown kinda bothers me, but thats just me, i would of outlined the whole cigarette in white and just put black where the brown is. all of these are just my oppinions ya can take them or leave em.

[JackDCurleo]

At 3/6/10 12:24 AM, MelleE wrote: im just trying to get scouted :D lol tell me if you think i could

Not with either of these pieces, The 007 one looks to have potential but the mouth looks wide open, one foot's bigger than the other, further up the leg the shin juts out making it look like you were trying to draw a robot or something, the cigar looks out of place with the monochromatic style and its flat, the hand holding the gun looks like a pokeman's or something, and the eyes are just off and the hair doesn't fit James bond's character.
There isn't much to the other picture but that eye has a very strange slant and the ear looks pretty weird other than that there's nothing else.
You should try posting more drawings, like a complete character and then ask for criticism so that you'll get more constructive criticism than this.

[MelleE]

an army man i made a year ago one of his feet is a bit blocky thoe

[JackDCurleo]

Arms are strange looking, face looks really flat as does helmet, the pocket on the shirt looks strangely placed, the gun's more of a stick, head shape is not very good: very blocky. It looks like he has nubs with leg extensions added on, his belt counteracts with the whole perspective, and his chest looks to have a giant tumor.
Post something that you've done recently to see if there's any improvement, then work from there.

[gmanthesandwhichking]

At 3/9/10 07:55 PM, MelleE wrote: an army man i made a year ago one of his feet is a bit blocky thoe

The proportions seem a little...off. The body just doesn't look right at all. The face is, I don't even know how words can describe it. And most of all, the gun looks like one of those floaty noodle pool toys.