what do you think?

[LionSir]

this is just something I made, and I want to know what you think about it, myself I don't think it is that great and I hope to become better but to advance I both need skill and advice, and I will gladly take it all.

[Ashman]

well done you figured out how to use the grass with 2 colours, now whats it supposed to be? cause all i see is random strokes and words

[LionSir]

At 2/27/10 11:14 PM, ashman112 wrote: well done you figured out how to use the grass with 2 colours, now whats it supposed to be? cause all i see is random strokes and words

well that's basically it, but most things I do have a hidden side, one that is to be figured out, it's to get the brain working.

[Kinsei]

grass brush?
well I must say this is a sad attempt at abstract art.

[Ashman]

At 2/27/10 11:17 PM, LionSir wrote:

At 2/27/10 11:14 PM, ashman112 wrote: well done you figured out how to use the grass with 2 colours, now whats it supposed to be? cause all i see is random strokes and words

well that's basically it, but most things I do have a hidden side, one that is to be figured out, it's to get the brain working.

sorry but it still just looks like random doodle, i dont take to that abstract hidden meaning stuff, i prefer art with substance than rubbish art thats apparently good because it has meaning

[Daverom]

If you're trying to pass random grass brush strokes off as abstract I'm going to punt you across the street.

the biggest street I can find

[Joshsouza]

What is this? I see that you used the grass thing with two colors pretty good because they actually knid of look like strokes then Misused grass brush!

[gmanthesandwhichking]

Umm...no offense, but it looks like you were just experimenting with the grass brush and just decided to post it on newgrounds and call it abstract. Because really, I don't know what the "message" is supposed to be, if there even is one.

[WaterShake]

Okay, i'm failing to see the point here.

Shakespearian for , don't you want to see?

Would imply a challenge of some sort. Given that it's "abstract" though, you're probably talking about something darker. I'm guessing one of the old cliches like the evil side of humanity or the truth about yourself etc etc.

But that doesn't connect at all with the image. So i'm lost.

I'm not detecting any message.

Please enlighten me

[jeeshwa123]

this happens all the time.
most of the newgrounds folk aren't deep enough to see past the fucking tankman.
personaly i thought it was a good start. Isn't all art brush strokes?

[jeeshwa123]

At 2/28/10 03:46 PM, jeeshwa123 wrote:

most of the newgrounds folk aren't deep enough to see past the fucking tankman.

no offence by the way haha, most of you in here i like ;D

[ReNaeNae]

At 2/27/10 11:17 PM, LionSir wrote: well that's basically it, but most things I do have a hidden side, one that is to be figured out, it's to get the brain working.

Are you trying to hide the fact that you have any artistic ability whatsoever? If so, job well done. If not, please enlighten me because apparently I'm not deep enough to see past the 30 seconds worth of brushstrokes and text.

[WaterShake]

Well you see i'm trying real hard to see past the tankman, but shitty pretentious "art" keeps on getting in the way. Yesterday we had ourselves some guy masquerading some doodles as "surrealism" and now we have this "abstract" shit.

Please, until the artist posts an explanation, i'm fairly content to leave my judgment on this as a shoddy attempt at high brow art.

Definition of abstract: existing in thought or as an idea but not having a physical or concrete existence.
This has no thought or idea.

[TurkeyOnAStick]

I've probably spent more time thinking about something witty to lock this thread with,
than you have behind your rubbish, fake abstract art.

And like you, I gave up and did it anyway.