flashero?

[DillonBrannick]

An art piece, I don't feel it's finished by a long shot, so advice would be very helpful, here it is "the origin of art":

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/24/10 08:01 PM, flashero wrote: An art piece, I don't feel it's finished by a long shot, so advice would be very helpful, here it is "the origin of art":

sorry poor quality here you go:
DUMP

[Ashman]

well it looks interesting to say the least, really abstract to say the least, i like how you used the colours and the glow, but i feel you could have put more detail into some aspects like the shading or the faces

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/24/10 08:22 PM, ashman112 wrote: well it looks interesting to say the least, really abstract to say the least, i like how you used the colours and the glow, but i feel you could have put more detail into some aspects like the shading or the faces

Yeah I got you, I was thinking the same and I was already planning to fix that, but it's always good to get a second opinion.
Thanks.

[bigjonny13]

This a personal art thread?
If so hooray.

[Ashman]

At 2/24/10 08:44 PM, flashero wrote:

At 2/24/10 08:22 PM, ashman112 wrote: well it looks interesting to say the least, really abstract to say the least, i like how you used the colours and the glow, but i feel you could have put more detail into some aspects like the shading or the faces

Yeah I got you, I was thinking the same and I was already planning to fix that, but it's always good to get a second opinion.
Thanks.

yeah its always good to have a backup, look forward to seeing what you post up next

[WaterShake]

Ok, I like the concept. It's about creativity etc. right? All the stuffs streaming from the pencil in the middle?

Whilst I don't think it's bad by any means, I just don\t think it's finished, like you acknowledged.

I'd like to see some more smaller stuff, whilst the page is "full" theres a lot of potential for you to layer some stuff. You can have things overlapping, intertwining etc. If you check out my page, my most recent news post has an example of what I mean.

Currently the colour palette is very warm. Whilst this isn't bad, I think you should either introduce some cooler colours, or recolour the turquoise coloured shapes stemming from the nib of the pencil, because I think they contrast too much just now.

A mix of line thickness would also help to make the picture have more "pop". Currently a lot of the lines are the same, slim thickness, if you vary them I think it'll help you're picture a lot.

Some more shading would make it look a little less flat. I think a lot of the things, the face for example are looking quite flat, if you add some further shading it'll give everything some more weight and depth.

I hope my advice will be helpfull, and don't give up.

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/25/10 02:14 AM, WaterShake wrote: I'd like to see some more smaller stuff, whilst the page is "full" theres a lot of potential for you to layer some stuff. You can have things overlapping, intertwining etc. If you check out my page, my most recent news post has an example of what I mean.

Currently the colour palette is very warm. Whilst this isn't bad, I think you should either introduce some cooler colours, or recolour the turquoise coloured shapes stemming from the nib of the pencil, because I think they contrast too much just now.

A mix of line thickness would also help to make the picture have more "pop". Currently a lot of the lines are the same, slim thickness, if you vary them I think it'll help you're picture a lot.

Some more shading would make it look a little less flat. I think a lot of the things, the face for example are looking quite flat, if you add some further shading it'll give everything some more weight and depth.

I hope my advice will be helpfull, and don't give up.

thanks man, who would've of known peole can be so helpful:D
I'll try out some of that, I think i should have more things in it, some more detail, better shading. oh and the line I might try that out.

Yay you get the concept

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/24/10 08:46 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: This a personal art thread?
If so hooray.

Yeah I guess it is.
so....... hooray

[gmanthesandwhichking]

Dude, really cool pic you got there. I like all the stuff that is coming out of the pencil point directly. Really cool. Now upload some more pics so we can all see more.

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/25/10 08:08 AM, gmanthesandwhichking wrote: Dude, really cool pic you got there. I like all the stuff that is coming out of the pencil point directly. Really cool. Now upload some more pics so we can all see more.

I have some up on my account already, and
DeviantArt

[ReNaeNae]

At 2/25/10 08:15 AM, flashero wrote: I have some up on my account already, and
DeviantArt

Please post your art IN the thread... don't just link. Thank yahs!

...for some reason I read your name as "flash-a-roo" lol!! :P

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/25/10 12:13 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:

At 2/25/10 08:15 AM, flashero wrote: I have some up on my account already, and
DeviantArt

Please post your art IN the thread... don't just link. Thank yahs!

...for some reason I read your name as "flash-a-roo" lol!! :P

flash-a-roo works for me, I'll post all the pics here so:
No.2 for the thread

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/25/10 12:18 PM, flashero wrote:

At 2/25/10 12:13 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:

At 2/25/10 08:15 AM, flashero wrote: I have some up on my account already, and
DeviantArt

Please post your art IN the thread... don't just link. Thank yahs!

...for some reason I read your name as "flash-a-roo" lol!! :P

flash-a-roo works for me, I'll post all the pics here so:
No.2 for the thread

that's called "Squirbit"; a mix between squirrel and rabbit!
No.3: Rocket Man done with oil and chalk pastels

[DillonBrannick]

No.4:"Tunes" a drawing of a someone listening to some music on a plane

[DillonBrannick]

No.5: "glasses", a pair of glasses want some eyes. this was to improve my drawing of eyes, I think it turned out quite well

[Ashman]

ok i still like the first pic most of all, but the new ones look nice, kinda trippy but still nice, what do you use flash and photoshop? or just one, and really like the first traditional piece has a cool effect

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/25/10 12:31 PM, ashman112 wrote: ok i still like the first pic most of all, but the new ones look nice, kinda trippy but still nice, what do you use flash and photoshop? or just one, and really like the first traditional piece has a cool effect

yeah I agree with you on favorites, I'm going to try and improve my "origin of art" peice before I upload it to newgrounds

[DillonBrannick]

No. 6:
"Scout!"
I've just been scouted!
Basically this is a drawing of a pilot scout (pencil drawing), dedicated to lgnxhll (the scouter... I suppose)
Hope you enjoy.

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/26/10 04:58 PM, flashero wrote: No. 6:
"Scout!"
I've just been scouted!
Basically this is a drawing of a pilot scout (pencil drawing), dedicated to lgnxhll (the scouter... I suppose)
Hope you enjoy.

No.1.1
well I was un-scouted.

just wondering how the shading on the face looks(just the face)

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/26/10 05:45 PM, flashero wrote:

At 2/26/10 04:58 PM, flashero wrote: No. 6:
"Scout!"
I've just been scouted!
Basically this is a drawing of a pilot scout (pencil drawing), dedicated to lgnxhll (the scouter... I suppose)
Hope you enjoy.

No.1.1
well I was un-scouted.

just wondering how the shading on the face looks(just the face)

HQ!

[Ashman]

At 2/26/10 05:45 PM, flashero wrote:

At 2/26/10 04:58 PM, flashero wrote: No. 6:
"Scout!"
I've just been scouted!
Basically this is a drawing of a pilot scout (pencil drawing), dedicated to lgnxhll (the scouter... I suppose)
Hope you enjoy.

No.1.1
well I was un-scouted.

thats cause lgnxhll isnt a good artist, you should check who scouts you before accepting, if there a bad artist dont accept cause theyll get unscouted and youll go down with them

[bigjonny13]

At 2/26/10 05:45 PM, flashero wrote: just wondering how the shading on the face looks(just the face)

Is there a difference between this version and the one you started the thread with?

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/26/10 06:14 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 2/26/10 05:45 PM, flashero wrote: just wondering how the shading on the face looks(just the face)

Is there a difference between this version and the one you started the thread with?

yeah just on the face though. thats what I was asking.

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/26/10 06:05 PM, ashman112 wrote: thats cause lgnxhll isnt a good artist, you should check who scouts you before accepting, if there a bad artist dont accept cause theyll get unscouted and youll go down with them

ok fair enough how do you like the art anyways

[Ashman]

i cannot see a difference apart from the newer one has got that fuzzy static

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/26/10 06:37 PM, ashman112 wrote: i cannot see a difference apart from the newer one has got that fuzzy static

you got to look at the HQ! one

[Spunky6666]

I absolutely love your Squirbit! It's so cute!

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/26/10 07:07 PM, Spunky6666 wrote: I absolutely love your Squirbit! It's so cute!

cheers!

[DillonBrannick]

An update on origin:

the shading is coming along nicely (so far), I think but what do you think?