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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 07:47 AM Reply


Already working on that, thanks for the comment and thank god it's all over. It all started out of nowhere and it wasn't even for me.

Some Trolls trying bemean and involve a innocent girl. And trying to make her look like a troll? Then making up a sketch for fun? And on top of that, draging others into the mess? Pfff, messed up. Glad it is over.

At 2/26/10 08:05 PM, Mabelma wrote: OK then, I shall do that. I was also going to ask you if you think that if you think that this piece will help me get scouted or will it just leave me where I am?

I seen many stuff in the art portal, I dont see why you wont enter it. Just be patience and everyting will work out, you even have a fan that allredy is trying to support you. So I think your going in the right direction.


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 08:05 AM Reply

Some Trolls trying bemean and involve a innocent girl. And trying to make her look like a troll? Then making up a sketch for fun? And on top of that, draging others into the mess? Pfff, messed up. Glad it is over.

Inorite.

I seen many stuff in the art portal, I dont see why you wont enter it. Just be patience and everyting will work out, you even have a fan that allredy is trying to support you. So I think your going in the right direction.

Yeah I guess you are right. I hope I get more fans with this with this piece or atleast get comments on it.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 08:41 AM Reply

Done? I didn't do the clouds because I honestly can't make them (as easy at it sounds, I'm an idiot and I can't do it) but I think it looks ok without it. Hope you like it and tell me your final comments before it goes out to the real world.

HD VersionDownload the image if you want to see the full quality image.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:16 AM Reply

Thoughts?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:24 AM Reply

awesome, upload it to the art portal now!!

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:30 AM Reply

Hehe, I think the people (lol, two of them) Have spoken, what are you waiting for? Come on! ;)


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:32 AM Reply

Awesome then, I'll upload it but what should I call it?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:36 AM Reply

Don't know it sounds weird, another name perhaps?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:38 AM Reply

i wanted to know, why are they actually lauging at him, lol

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:41 AM Reply

name should be "your not tough"
or "your not scary"

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:42 AM Reply

They are laughing at him for being different.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:43 AM Reply

At 2/27/10 09:42 AM, Mabelma wrote: They are laughing at him for being different.

then call it "crasher racism"

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 09:49 AM Reply

I'll name it Knight's Sorrow. I like that name. Thanks for all the help guys. It was greatly appreciated and I will keep this updated with pieces that I will be making. Hope you like what's coming.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 10:06 AM Reply

Here's the link

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 11:48 AM Reply

It's not easy being green...

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 04:56 PM Reply

Don't know, Its already named knight's sorrow.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 05:50 PM Reply

What do you guys think, I'm planning on inking this and coloring and use it as my profile image. With some words in the middle but this time I want to color it different like something shaded in the style of this image.

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/johnn yutah/tank-girl

but I seriously don't know how that's done so any tips, tricks or anything like that is greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance. Hope you like the sketch, I will add some arms to him and things like that I just though it looked good enough for a preliminary sketch. There's also a little tank on the side of this image that I cut off in paint.net but if you want to see it just tell me. I just noticed he's missing his rank on the side. A little idea on my mind, I think some blood on the armor and maybe some dents would make it look cool, what do you think?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 06:14 PM Reply

ashman112 wrote:

i wanted to know, why are they actually lauging at him, lol

I was wondering the same thing. Like if he had a tiny sword or something? Insinuating he was not "much of a man".

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 06:31 PM Reply

Because he was different. I might go back and work on that but for now any comments on the sketch?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 27th, 2010 @ 07:52 PM Reply

Comments on the sketch should I add, fix, redo anything at all?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 08:29 AM Reply

Since noone seems to have a comment about it I'll go ink it and come back later.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 08:35 AM Reply

At 2/28/10 08:29 AM, Mabelma wrote: Since noone seems to have a comment about it I'll go ink it and come back later.

sometimes its good to just finish a piece, and start on the new one. try not to dwell on one drawing for too long


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 08:40 AM Reply

That's what I'm doing, I was wondering if someone had any comments on the tankmen sketch I did fir my profile image.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 08:45 AM Reply

At 2/28/10 08:40 AM, Mabelma wrote: That's what I'm doing, I was wondering if someone had any comments on the tankmen sketch I did fir my profile image.

it looked fine to me.
I say ink it and lets see what you come up with then.
how are you inking, digitally or by hand?


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 08:46 AM Reply

At 2/28/10 08:40 AM, Mabelma wrote: That's what I'm doing, I was wondering if someone had any comments on the tankmen sketch I did fir my profile image.

Yeah, but I also kinda meant that you shouldnt rely on other poeples advice so much. The best way to learn is to do it (wrong).


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 08:50 AM Reply

At 2/28/10 08:46 AM, J-qb wrote:
At 2/28/10 08:40 AM, Mabelma wrote: That's what I'm doing, I was wondering if someone had any comments on the tankmen sketch I did fir my profile image.
Yeah, but I also kinda meant that you shouldnt rely on other poeples advice so much.

I have to agree with this, if you take every piece to get critiqued by tons of other people, you'll never get anything done. and no offense, but a profile image really isn't a big deal. I understand you want to look good, but you don't need a critique on something like that.


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 09:02 AM Reply

I ink digitally

I get what you are saying and I'll go do it (wrong)

Ok but it doesn't matter what the piece is for, in my eyes it has to be good or it doesn't work.

Thanks for the comments guys.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 09:06 AM Reply

At 2/28/10 09:02 AM, Mabelma wrote: I get what you are saying and I'll go do it (wrong)

I think what QB meant with this statement is, both a true and false statment, as in "you learn by failing"
which is true in the fact that if you dail you know what not to do, but if you learn nothing from your failed attempt or continue to do it wrongly, then you truly do not progress


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 09:31 AM Reply

At 2/28/10 09:06 AM, Kinsei01 wrote:
At 2/28/10 09:02 AM, Mabelma wrote: I get what you are saying and I'll go do it (wrong)
I think what QB meant with this statement is, both a true and false statment, as in "you learn by failing"
which is true in the fact that if you dail you know what not to do, but if you learn nothing from your failed attempt or continue to do it wrongly, then you truly do not progress

Yeah I got what he said. I was just joking but thanks for that little explanation. I'll go ink and come back later.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. Feb. 28th, 2010 @ 09:41 AM Reply

TBH i don't think theres much more that can be done. Maybe it's finally time to let go?


nobody goes there anymore. its too popular.

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