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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 20:14:54 Reply

I think it looks good too..
perhaps the rock in the background is alittle too light,
but its not a big deal. good overall :D

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 20:22:38 Reply

At 2/25/10 08:14 PM, Jobertson wrote: I think it looks good too..
perhaps the rock in the background is alittle too light,
but its not a big deal. good overall :D

Looks who's here, Joberston. Thanks for the comment I think you are right I'll fix that.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 20:44:58 Reply

A few more comments?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 20:51:04 Reply

ok apart from the shadow angle, the only other thing i see that needs doing is some detail in the sky, like clouds or something, or different gradients, i know its supposed to be cartoony, so dont overdo the detail on that, or anything else

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 21:08:12 Reply

I will add some clouds.

Any other comments on the piece so far?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 21:10:30 Reply

the sun where the light source is lol, or is that covered by the tree

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 21:21:35 Reply

That's covered by the tree.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 21:27:35 Reply

At 2/25/10 09:10 PM, ashman112 wrote: the sun where the light source is lol, or is that covered by the tree

actually i figured it was still off the page by quite a bit


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-25 21:37:40 Reply

Yeah that's true.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 12:30:29 Reply

It's so good to be so close to finishing. I feel that this is my best piece so far and I have learn so much, it's just amazing. Thanks you so much guys and thank you for everything Kinsei You're the best.

I will have a small update soon. I was thinking that this could be easily turned into a poster, what do you think?

I would like a few comments on the characters, I think the Barbarian Boss could use a little more work but I don't really know. Thanks in advance.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 12:44:14 Reply

At 2/26/10 12:35 PM, SkilledBrush wrote: Hi Mabelma! Brush here! ^^

I have keept my eyes on this thread for a short while and I like were this is going. You are very ambitious and takes advice, but still dont give up the ideas you believe in. You let the advice help you, but not controll you. Thats really good!

You were right, this piece is going to be great! The only thing I could comment, without using 2 000 words, is the tree in the backgound. It looks like you tried angel the view up towards the tree. But becuse the other perspectives are different, it looks a little off. You could try to hide the end of the stem "into" the branches.

Its not so importent, becuse on second though, it could just be a very big tree so that this cant be seen in the scen.

Thank you so much Brush for the suggestion but I don't know think it looks bad but if someone else thinks the same thing I will fix that. Thank you so much for everything you have done with me Brush it is greatly appreciated and thanks for trying to get me scouted it is great that you did that for me. You have become from a total stranger to a great friend. Keep on rocking.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 16:04:49 Reply

really there is nothing else to change, you got any new shots to post up, cause i think its done

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 16:38:59 Reply

Awesome then.

Sorry Ash but I'm not at my house right now so I haven't been able to fix the shadows, and the rock but as soon as I get home I'll post something up. I really appreciate every single thing all of you have done.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 18:24:03 Reply

At 2/26/10 06:23 PM, ashman112 wrote

fingering trolls is a bad idea

agreed, actually, I do believe it will become quite messy!


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 18:26:22 Reply

At 2/26/10 06:23 PM, SkilledBrush wrote: I found this pic, made by JohnnyUtah (He has a really great lastname by the way, It can be pronounce right by only reading it, for a Swedish person ... Uuutaaaahhh)

err hate to break it to ya, but his names not really jonnyutah, its jeff bandolin

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 18:28:05 Reply

At 2/26/10 06:26 PM, SkilledBrush wrote:
At 2/26/10 06:24 PM, Snowman wrote: At 2/26/10 06:23 PM, ashman112 wrote
fingering trolls is a bad idea
agreed, actually, I do believe it will become quite messy!
Woow, guys. Your some real brains are you not? I'm giving Rottna the "silent treatment" I'm talking to Mabelma.

and were having fun, lol, let us play with the troll wont you, iv already helped mabelma so this is my downtime lol

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 18:30:21 Reply

At 2/26/10 06:26 PM, SkilledBrush wrote::

Woow, guys. Your some real brains are you not? I'm giving Rottna the "silent treatment" I'm talking to Mabelma.

Im sorry, I need my daily input of lols somehow.
Last i checked, were some real people, not androids who are devoid of fun, yes, we give help to people, but i believe i have already contributed to this thread. And we know what your doing, its quite fucking obvious...


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:01:05 Reply

At 2/26/10 06:49 PM, Rottna wrote: I'll get you Brush! One day I will, I will take away everything you hold tight! I ruin you! It's take me 5 years to get here, one day you snapp! I make shure you be no more then a joke! You will have to crawl out of newgrounds when I'm done with you!

Oh, and by the way! ANYONE can do bad spelling! Even a "Troll" like me!

Yes but there's a difference between insulting people while sound like a complete and utter retard, and insulting people and doing it with dignity.

It's taken you five years to get on this site? I had no idea it was that hard to fill out an application... And so far, you're doing a pretty good job of making yourself a joke, or have you not noticed everyone's posts?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:06:38 Reply

At 2/26/10 07:00 PM, Rottna wrote: We have made this go so far allredy, have we not CookieGun? Why stop now? This is starting to become ... reeeeally fun! Lets se what we can get out fo you!

oh my god he figured out how to use the spell checker, dude its quite obvious your an internet stalker goin after young girls on websites, i know your real identity pedo bear

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:27:51 Reply

Yes it has but I don't want my thread to get delete or locked for some asshole so is there anything else we can do about it?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:29:04 Reply

Cant you people take a joke! Whats wrong with you people!


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:29:47 Reply

No more flaming, off topic posting, derailing or +1 posting.

I don't want to have to clean up another mess in this thread.

Thank you.


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:31:16 Reply

Thera a time an a place for everything and this is nit the time nor the place. Now get back on topic or get out and to all of those that posted would you please comment on the piece? I would like to hear some more comments before I submit it.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:32:54 Reply

Thank you so much for that mister Kraig, would by any chance have any comment on the piece?

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:37:30 Reply

I know right, I will have something up soon, don't worry about it.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:38:15 Reply

At 2/26/10 07:32 PM, Mabelma wrote: Thank you so much for that mister Kraig, would by any chance have any comment on the piece?

Unfortunately, Everyone coming in here does not want to talk about your piece, I simply asked kraig to come in and clean the thread up seeing as it got out of hand.

but to be nice, i will comment.

tis looking ok, The one thing that kills me is that the sky in the background is very bland. Its just blue. and if the piece is supposed to have someone being humiliated in it, why not make it less of a lighter color, make it more like a gray- blue or something like that?


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:47:02 Reply

Worst troll fight for a long time. You should angle the shadows a little.


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 19:58:17 Reply

At 2/26/10 07:38 PM, Snowman wrote:
At 2/26/10 07:32 PM, Mabelma wrote: Thank you so much for that mister Kraig, would by any chance have any comment on the piece?
Unfortunately, Everyone coming in here does not want to talk about your piece, I simply asked kraig to come in and clean the thread up seeing as it got out of hand.

but to be nice, i will comment.

tis looking ok, The one thing that kills me is that the sky in the background is very bland. Its just blue. and if the piece is supposed to have someone being humiliated in it, why not make it less of a lighter color, make it more like a gray- blue or something like that?

That doesn't sound like a bad idea snowman, I'll try that out but my question is do you think I should also add some clouds with the gray sky? Thanks for the comment. If only everyone who came into this topic posted something about the piece or at least on topic.

At 2/26/10 07:47 PM, Skrootch wrote: Worst troll fight for a long time. You should angle the shadows a little.

Already working on that, thanks for the comment and thank god it's all over. It all started out of nowhere and it wasn't even for me.

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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 20:02:09 Reply

At 2/26/10 07:58 PM, Mabelma wrote: That doesn't sound like a bad idea snowman, I'll try that out but my question is do you think I should also add some clouds with the gray sky? Thanks for the comment. If only everyone who came into this topic posted something about the piece or at least on topic.

Yes, that can work, but make them a drakish gray too - not as dark as storm clouds - bot not a light color


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Response to Improving one of my pieces. 2010-02-26 20:05:18 Reply

OK then, I shall do that. I was also going to ask you if you think that if you think that this piece will help me get scouted or will it just leave me where I am? I don't care if I get scouted with it or not but at least I know that I learned a shit lot of things while creating it and that's already a win for me.