Spagneti's Showcase!

[Spags]

Let's start out with everything I've done so far that I didn't delete.
It's all fairly short so far but whatevs.
Here's my most recent, and best I think.
A Love Story

Here's my lip sync testing:
Hello Miss Lady!

Here's my first 'good' one, it's a bit violent:
Splodey!

Here's a bit of a messed up one, but also experimenting with splatteriness:
Shett

And that's all for now!
Please leave some criticism/review of which one you liked best and what I can improve in the future.

[Nayhan]

Nothing too special. I think you should try and move on from stick people and try and come up with a more a complicated character style. The blood effects need to be more smooth and flowing. In both the one where the head got shot and the one with the ass you could see all the individual line strokes when you should be drawing the outline of the blood and then filling in. That way it will look more liquid like. Quite good overall keep practising.

[Spags]

At 2/18/10 05:26 AM, Nayhan wrote: Nothing too special. I think you should try and move on from stick people and try and come up with a more a complicated character style.

They aren't stick people, they're blob people.
Sorry to be nitpicky there, but I was adamant never to make a stick movie when I got flash.

The blood effects need to be more smooth and flowing. In both the one where the head got shot and the one with the ass you could see all the individual line strokes when you should be drawing the outline of the blood and then filling in. That way it will look more liquid like.

I thought it would be too boring that way, but I'll give it a try.

Quite good overall keep practising.

Thanks!