is this good ?

[Icandraw]

i am working on a game with up-a-notch
it will include all the bots here is P-Bot :D

[DillonBrannick]

At 2/17/10 01:03 PM, Icandraw wrote: i am working on a game with up-a-notch
it will include all the bots here is P-Bot :D

I think the jump needs some more work it's too stiff or something, not natural

[Zyphonee]

The tweens are acceptable, as you are animating a robot composed of metallic pieces, so they don't bend or anything like that, although the running loop should have his torso flail for right to left and viceversa a bit more, as that would add to the motion.

Also work on your timing, your characters don't seem like they have much weight.

[bl00db47h]

I agree, work on timing, I also think they should be faster. And the jump is very stiff and it just loops without him coming down, it's incomplete.

[Innermike]

Ease please its easy so ease P-

bot of course

Even robots dont magically float their components around , ease him up and add some weight

MOre importantly however is your body separation , youre really telling me that if you were going to blast a powerful weapon and you were a top heavy robot youd just stand still and raise youre arm ? get his legs moving into position with some recoil on shot or somthing