First art

[Tyko]

This is my first piece of artwork i have posted on negrounds, would love to read your views about it.

[GrumpyTom]

At 2/12/10 06:36 PM, Tyko11 wrote: This is my first piece of artwork i have posted on negrounds, would love to read your views about it.

Hands are a bit too small and i'm not crazy about the colour, it's an okay piece.

[icelegs]

At 2/12/10 06:40 PM, GrumpyTom wrote:

At 2/12/10 06:36 PM, Tyko11 wrote: This is my first piece of artwork i have posted on negrounds, would love to read your views about it.

Hands are a bit too small and i'm not crazy about the colour, it's an okay piece.

yeah thats true the hands are small.....

[Aigis]

At 2/12/10 06:40 PM, GrumpyTom wrote: Hands are a bit too small

Ducks don't have hands, what the fuck?

[Daverom]

At 2/12/10 06:36 PM, Tyko11 wrote: This is my first piece of artwork i have posted on negrounds, would love to read your views about it.

I'm not a fan when it comes to taking famous characters and taking them WAAAY out of character.
But ignoring that, the hands are small, could use some shading, and its a little hard to see the body on the slightly lighter background.

At 2/12/10 07:11 PM, icelegs wrote: yeah thats true the hands are small.....

Newgrounds doesn't take lightly to art theft young lady. Try stealing from less popular artists, or not at all.
Yeah, not at all works, lets go with that.

[Ashman]

At 2/12/10 07:33 PM, Aigis wrote:

At 2/12/10 06:40 PM, GrumpyTom wrote: Hands are a bit too small

Ducks don't have hands, what the fuck?

do cartoons ever make sense, ducks dont stand upright like that or carry knives but you didnt point that out

[gmanthesandwhichking]

At 2/12/10 07:33 PM, Aigis wrote:

At 2/12/10 06:40 PM, GrumpyTom wrote: Hands are a bit too small

Ducks don't have hands, what the fuck?

More like what the duck?
You need to do some shading, lighter background, and yeas, the hands ARE too small.

[GrumpyTom]

At 2/12/10 07:39 PM, ashman112 wrote:

Ducks don't have hands, what the fuck?

do cartoons ever make sense, ducks dont stand upright like that or carry knives but you didnt point that out

ashman112 just sat alone and did his homework whilst all the other kids watched cartoons...

[Tyko]

Thanks for all the comments and ways to improve i will use them in my next art piece. Thank you.

[Ashman]

At 2/13/10 05:55 AM, GrumpyTom wrote:

At 2/12/10 07:39 PM, ashman112 wrote:

Ducks don't have hands, what the fuck?

do cartoons ever make sense, ducks dont stand upright like that or carry knives but you didnt point that out

ashman112 just sat alone and did his homework whilst all the other kids watched cartoons...

no i watched my fair share of cartoons, along with about 5 other peoples shares, i was just stating a point there, that cartoons dont need to make sense