At 2/13/10 06:52 PM, JKAmovies wrote:
@ZaneZansorrow: I made a comment on your piece some pages ago, it didn't make it in, sorry.
i was just reviewing pages 1-7 and both yourself and Captain Ben talk a lot about opacity, bringing the lined paper through more, because...after all it is supposed to look like it has been drawn, painted, sketched, doodled on the 3 types of paper you have clearly set aside for this collab. However, and no to offend any particular NG'r, but like Artist Lost or a few others--by the way outstanding artwork...the pieces mostly hide and cover the lined paper you want to display and you have accepted them....where-as Zane's piece (Peace Yo 2 u too) I feel is right for the collab. Maybe needs more on the paper...and some bolder lines...but looks like artwork you would take out any piece of paper to get down to remember it or flare like when in high-school on notebooks, covers, etc. This is just my opinion...but i say "Let Zane in". Peace