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Heres a sample of my work hit me up i'll be able to do something even on short nodice

At 3/1/10 05:56 PM, macboo11 wrote: Heres a sample of my work hit me up i'll be able to do something even on short nodice

the point of this collab is art made on/ for lined paper, hence the note book theme...

Well done Zanesorrow. I think this one will definitely fit in the collab, let's let Jka be the judge. You really improved since the last time I saw your works. Congratulations on learning how to use solid colors. Great work.

At 3/1/10 04:09 PM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: is this too dark or alright?

That's shaping up really nicely. I would try and make it fade a little better into the background, something to make just the background stream and grass a little more interesting to look at.

WIP

Alight so this is my newest version. A pencil sketch of the newgrounds tank insted of that thumbnail.
What ya think?

At first i thought im gonna have a problem figuring out how to control the opacity of the grass and stream but thank you layer duplication :D. I was wondering if you meant to see some of the line a little on the grass and stream part of the background.

That is coming along really well. Keep doing what your doing and I'm sure that will be great when its done.

Say hello to Itachi!!!!!!

Ya, sorry for the double post. I would just want to let all you people know, that I'm done. It only took me 3 days to finish this.

Here it is!!!

If you mean the cube and boldy light then sure, that cube and bright light thing on top of it that makes it boldly looking is definitely not my skill lol, it would be pretty cool if i could give these sort of effects with the basic tools but oh well. Now for the quest to toning down the grass and stream, is this too dark or alright?

one mistake that 99.9% of artist do: antennaes of ants and other insects are located at middle of their face, just like whiskers.

At 3/2/10 01:33 AM, Are-You-Evil2 wrote: Ya, sorry for the double post. I would just want to let all you people know, that I'm done. It only took me 3 days to finish this.

Here it is!!!

pretty nice maybe it'd look better if you turn down a little the opacity of the background face so the lines can be seen

At 3/1/10 11:44 PM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: At first i thought im gonna have a problem figuring out how to control the opacity of the grass and stream but thank you layer duplication :D. I was wondering if you meant to see some of the line a little on the grass and stream part of the background.

man it's amazing how much effort your putting in it i'm sure when you decide it's finished it's gonna be awesome

At 3/1/10 11:13 PM, fireshade wrote: WIP

Alight so this is my newest version. A pencil sketch of the newgrounds tank insted of that thumbnail.
What ya think?

that tank looks much better now you did it yourself, i think it fits better with the color explosion too

Emuzin - Looks too messy and rushed. Declined.
Bagman07 - Looks a little too simple for my taste. Declined.
Luxembourg - Looks good to me. Accepted (PNG & INFO).
THEANTIFULP - Resize it to fit and I'll accept.
zooominsh - Accepted.
TheAutocrat - The line work looks a little rushed and doesn't fit well with the overall design, maybe try thickening it or changing the colour to a darker skin tone (same with the eye). . .
fireshade - That is looking AWESOME.
Are-You-Evil2 - I kinda like the one with the pencil sketched BG. Accepted (PNG & INFO).

Also, I've been told that the plain paper BG LINK isn't working, so if you can't get it, download it here.

At 3/2/10 07:29 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 3/1/10 11:13 PM, fireshade wrote: Alight so this is my newest version. A pencil sketch of the newgrounds tank insted of that thumbnail.
What ya think?

I think that all you drew was the mediocre newgrounds tank. The rest is just a bunch of brush effects that you really didn't do anything for.

that seems a little harsh, i agree that his wip sketched tank could stand for improvment but hes on the right tack...
fireshade, what you could do was remake the tank with the theme of the explosion, but use a solid shape and darker colors....

WIP continued.

Can I have some ideas on what I might add, so I can totally either follow or conflict them?

One I kinda threw together.. just trying to get an idea going with 3D for this ( since I haven't noticed any yet)

Cool, thanks, JKA! And, I guess, with that, I'm done with my submissions. That's 5 accepted thus far. I'll still participate in this thread, though, as I want to be a part of this collab.

Heres a PNG for the fifth one: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/c99f cbd43a578f7cb2f2aba7ca3e8c4c

Oh, and, out of curiosity: If I wanted to replace one of my previous submissions with a new one, could I? Not saying I will, but I'm thinking that it's pretty possible that I or someone else might want to change their mind somewhere down the line, considering the massive amount of time left for this collab.

fireshade, what you could do was remake the tank with the theme of the explosion, but use a solid shape and darker colors....

ah... alright. I like the "doodle" feel of the tank it gives it that sketch book feel. I think ill end up just cleaning up that tank and be done with it.

At 2/28/10 12:31 AM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote:

At 2/27/10 05:50 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 2/27/10 05:47 PM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote: how's this?

bad color choices, they clash too much, it hurts the eyes some what, could you tone it down a little?

got it.

how is it it now?
this time i couldn't help but throw mgaman in there

At 3/2/10 10:38 PM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote:

how is it it now?
this time i couldn't help but throw mgaman in there

good, you didn't have to do a entire color overhaul, just needed to tone down the ones you had. also I don't think you should have that megaman in there for already discussed reasons on your blog post.

At 2/28/10 06:11 AM, Bagman07 wrote: I did a pic, opinions now!

that is great but
try bringing up the quality i don't think circles/stick people will make it
but its a great design to start from!

At 3/2/10 10:41 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 3/2/10 10:38 PM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote:

how is it it now?
this time i couldn't help but throw mgaman in there

good, you didn't have to do a entire color overhaul, just needed to tone down the ones you had. also I don't think you should have that megaman in there for already discussed reasons on your blog post.

yeah i know i just felt like putting that there for some reason i don't know but now it's gone.

At 3/2/10 10:52 PM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote:

At 3/2/10 10:41 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 3/2/10 10:38 PM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote:

how is it it now?
this time i couldn't help but throw mgaman in there

good, you didn't have to do a entire color overhaul, just needed to tone down the ones you had. also I don't think you should have that megaman in there for already discussed reasons on your blog post.

yeah i know i just felt like putting that there for some reason i don't know but now it's gone.

here's the .PNG:
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/35b2 50cb0d80b07eab7260fe1be762c3

My mediocre tank got darker more defined lines. I decided I wanted to keep that sketch feel to the tank. Thank you to EVERYBODY who gave their imput about my work.

JKA, if you don't have any problems with this, I'd like to submit this version.

At 3/2/10 07:08 PM, JKAmovies wrote: Emuzin - Looks too messy and rushed. Declined.

I can tidy up the guitar picture..what about the chard dragon picture?

I saw Are-you-evil2's epic work of sasuke and itachi and I decided I'd like to make a sasuke inspired submission as well. I suck at anime but here's my attempt in drawing and coloring sasuke.

Accepted, thank you.

And This collab is inspiring me , I wanna make more drawings but still we have 6 months and I think it will be better if I make my other drawinf after some months.