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At 2/27/10 05:47 PM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote: how's this?

bad color choices, they clash too much, it hurts the eyes some what, could you tone it down a little?

haha. was so fun with this. i just hope that there was more space, to continue draw somthing more ;D

u may want to see it larger? http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/well-
grounded/handprint

At 2/27/10 08:42 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 2/27/10 06:47 AM, Emuzin wrote: I think you should reconsider Stained: the Castle Crasher Eater

I wouldn't cause it's not that great

What exactly isn't so great about it....it is supposed to be the stained paper eating up the drawing...is there something you can suggest BigJohnny13 that would make it more acceptable?

Canada
20 - Male
Animation and Art Student
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/5415 6a10f577b1dc0e0f0b7bb5997dbf

If anyone wants to critique, by all means do.

At 2/27/10 06:23 PM, fireshade wrote: Canada
20 - Male
Animation and Art Student
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/5415 6a10f577b1dc0e0f0b7bb5997dbf

If anyone wants to critique, by all means do.

i think your colour choice used is excellent, and it shows a lot of freedom and movement....as if something were being blow apart or exploding...but I don't think they are going to go for the clip art tank...if you drew it I apologize....but this is only my opinion. Good Job otherwise.

That's epicly explosive. I guess my critique is more like a question "I wonder what would look better? Tankman on top of notepad or tankman opacity turn into a notepad?". I think the explosion look great as it is.

Like so?

At 2/27/10 06:10 PM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: Still in progress, all I did so far is placing plain colors. Now to place even more colors on top of the colors and to put shades and lights. Does the pic look easier or harder to see?

That is WAY more clear to look at. The stream and the surrounding grass looks really unrefined though. so you may want to fix that up a bit so it fits with the style. Try outlining the areas you feel are necessary, cleaning it up, adding some more texture (like that around the anthill, and using a more mellow color for the grass. The one you have right there feels too bright.

At 2/27/10 06:41 PM, fireshade wrote:

That's epicly explosive. I guess my critique is more like a question "I wonder what would look better? Tankman on top of notepad or tankman opacity turn into a notepad?". I think the explosion look great as it is.

Like so?

For the transparency...yes, so you can see the lines going through helped.....you did a really go job with drawing the tank and tankman, but if you cut and pasted it...i would change it, the voting squad accepting the art will tell you the same thing and than they will make you do it to their specs until they like it enough to accept....again, only my opinion---i still like the piece though.

For the transparency...yes, so you can see the lines going through helped.....you did a really go job with drawing the tank and tankman, but if you cut and pasted it...i would change it, the voting squad accepting the art will tell you the same thing and than they will make you do it to their specs until they like it enough to accept....again, only my opinion---i still like the piece though.

Hey right on, thanks for your imput it really helps. I guess I got so caught up with how the explosion looks that i forgot the tank was just a clipart. Back to the drawing board.

Do you (or anyone else) have any suggestions for the style of the tank?

Still a WIP. Glad the due date's in October. Things are progressing very slowly. Figuring out how that right arm should look.

At 2/27/10 05:50 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 2/27/10 05:47 PM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote: how's this?

bad color choices, they clash too much, it hurts the eyes some what, could you tone it down a little?

i agree, perhaps if used layers/ dif shades of on color with another color thrown in for contrast it wouldnt look so stark...

>Havegum: That looks SO MUCH better now, I really like the changes: Accepted.

>14hourlunchbreak: I really like this, so very different than anything I've seen so far (reminds me of CampNorth), but. . . It's hard to incorporate that it's notepad paper, maybe make the BG a little less purple so you can see the lines a little clearer. Either way: Accepted.

>MEGAMAN7659: Yeah, I agree with Kinsei, it's really hard to make out the colours, make them a little transparent and tone it down a little.

>well-grounded: If you placed this onto one of the notepad papers, I'd probably accepted it :j

>ZaneZansorrow:Starting to look much better :D

>fireshade: I don't even think I can decline this. . . its so damn epic, just go with your own judgement and style for the tank, it's up to you what you want to do with it. I look forward to see what you do with it ;)

>Kaishu: looking good so far, I love how the guy on the rights hand is coming towards the page.

WIP

At 2/27/10 07:12 PM, fireshade wrote:

For the transparency...yes, so you can see the lines going through helped.....you did a really go job with drawing the tank and tankman, but if you cut and pasted it...i would change it, the voting squad accepting the art will tell you the same thing and than they will make you do it to their specs until they like it enough to accept....again, only my opinion---i still like the piece though.

Hey right on, thanks for your imput it really helps. I guess I got so caught up with how the explosion looks that i forgot the tank was just a clipart. Back to the drawing board.

Do you (or anyone else) have any suggestions for the style of the tank?

Try drawing the same one freehand from looking at different pictures of tanks...it could be something else exploding or firing...it doesn't have to be a NGs character or image from NG

Do you (or anyone else) have any suggestions for the style of the tank?

the tank looks decent now, but perhaps you could add diffrent levels of transparancy/ shadding

Hey JKAMovies...did I do something wrong? : ( Why are you ignoring me or not giving me anymore advise for your collab? Anyway, Here is my final piece....I don't think I have 5 in me this month. I call it Blue Notes (a dedication to Johnny Cash) on Old Paper---Emuzin out!

>fireshade: I don't even think I can decline this. . . its so damn epic, just go with your own judgement and style for the tank, it's up to you what you want to do with it. I look forward to see what you do with it ;)

Thank you. I appreciate you saying that. I'm going to try somethings and I will get back to you with what I have come with. For now I will just put that first one as a WIP.

At 2/27/10 08:37 AM, JKAmovies wrote:

I appreciate that you're so eager to get into the collab, but maybe you should re-try next year and develop your art skills more until then, you can REALLY improve within a years time (I know first hand).

I guess I SHOULD wait 'til next year unless I make something really cool in 6 months but thanks for putting up with my shit

yo! i'm almost done with sasuke! i'm working on some other chars to put.

At 2/27/10 05:50 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 2/27/10 05:47 PM, MEGAMAN7659 wrote: how's this?

bad color choices, they clash too much, it hurts the eyes some what, could you tone it down a little?

got it.

I did a pic, opinions now!

is there any place for ur old friend :P

At 2/28/10 06:11 AM, Bagman07 wrote: I did a pic, opinions now!

Stick figures

So yesterday I made another drawings.
Alien mafia yes I was stoned. :)

I hope someone likes a trippy art too.

I hope someone likes a trippy art too.

Stoned or not that looks awesome.

agreed, that pic is pretty awsome... just wonder what all was going through his head at the time?