My haiku poems

[Mismo]

This is some haiku poems I have written, hope you like them.

John Doe is my name.

Jane Doe she was my sister.

Father also so.

Three hundred seconds.

What takes so many seconds?

Creating Haikus.

I don't like you Sue!

Well I don't like you Johnny!

Behold a marriage.

Cowards behind words.

Or cowards behind muscles.

Cowards are the same.

Ernest Hemingway.

He was kind of great right.

You know how he died.

Music is my life.

Without it I would die.

Smells like teen spirte.

I could write something.

But I don't really want to.

What's that now you say?

No I'm not funny.

Neither am I a poet.

I just like to write.

Life is mysterious.

Oh, so many clues to find.

Like to find the clue?

Why, oh why did you?

Trade the cow for magic beans.

Friend your in deep.

Hidden it shall be.

In poems you shall see.

Find it might you will.

I can't go on boy.

I can't go on any more.

This is the last boy.

[Mismo]

At 2/2/10 01:41 PM, Mismo wrote: This is some haiku poems I have written, hope you like them.

Sorry that the spaces beetwen the poems are so small.

[RWT]

Just to begin:

He was kind of great right.
Life is mysterious

And

In poems you shall see

Have six syllables, and

Friend you're in deep

Has four.

They were... okay. Didn't seem like a lot of effort was put into them, though they show promise. Try writing some non-poetry first, or pick a kind of poetry that's less... easy to abuse. There wasn't anything metrical or lyrical about any of your verses; they barely had the correct number of syllables. Write a few even lines with a rhyme or a cadence and we'll be somewhere.