Interactable story.

[Shabbo]

So I'm going to write a small story and you guys will choose A, B, Or C of whats going to happen next. Okay?

You're sitting in your living room playing video games, and then your phone rings. It's your friend, he says to come over to the public park and look at this trick he can do. You decide to go, you put on some pants and head out the door.

On your way there you as you cross the corner to the park a crazed man runs at you and knocks you too the ground.
While on the ground he bites a large chunk of flesh out of your arm. You scream in pain but nobody is there to hear it.

You shove him off of your body and run, you pick up a brick, and lob it at his head, it kills him. At Least you think.

What next?
A- Run to a hospital
B-Run to your friend and boast about it.
C- Bawl your eyes out and bleed there on the asphalt.

[TrevorW]

C please

[Shabbo]

At 1/31/10 09:07 PM, TrevorW wrote: C please

Oooooookay.

As you lay there screaming your friend decides to walk to your house to see why you're taking so long.
He see's you, and calls an ambulance.

After a long drive you arrive at the hopital, the doctor gasps and has you sent to a small cell you sit there now.
A- sleep
B-Bang on the iron on the cell door untill a gaurd come by.
C-Take the gameboy out of your pocket and play it to pass the time.
Also for now on people will vote.

[TrevorW]

I kinda thought you would write more than just the little tid bit. If you are going to do this try to write at least a couple paragraphs.

[Shabbo]

I know, it'll get allot better, trust me I have a huge thing planned.

Okay assuming you passed the time.
You grow angry, and seemingly stronger. Aggravated at the smallest thing it seems. A small mouse comes by and you feel the urge to kill it.

A nurse comes to the cell door and tells you you may leave now, and that There's somebody waiting for you. You walk to the end of the hall and you walk into a small office with a tall man sitting in a chair at a desk. He asked you to sit down. You reluctantly sit down in the chair.

He begins to ask you questions, growing tired of him very quickly.
He asks you why you let the man carrying the disease bite you.

A- Answer calmly and allow him to continue.
B-Yell at him that it wasn't your fault, and throw the chair you were sitting on at the wall.
C- Remain silent.

[TrevorW]

A would be best.

[Version2]

Hell no! I vote B! Let the rage consume him!

[Shabbo]

I have to wait for another person to vote for A or B again.

[Tobi]

At 1/31/10 09:20 PM, shabbo wrote:

A- Answer calmly and allow him to continue.

This.

[Evark]

Nope. Sorry. Maybe if we can figure out a way for this to work, but the writing forum is currently for works that you've already started or completed and for people to comment on and give advice to how you can improve your work. Interactive story threads don't offer an opportunity for that, they simply prompt people to respond indicating a preference of story's direction. By their very nature, giving criticism is instantly off-topic, and that's contrary to this forum's intention.