At 2/2/10 10:25 AM, havegum wrote:
By now, some of you may have figured that I'm aiming to color every single linework in this thread, and so I am!
FOR THE WIN!http://altrian.newgrounds.com/ linework + two lightsources = hard to color!
I think it turned out okay tough ...
Looks pretty good! If I may, I'd suggest bumping your contrast up a little bit when you're shading things so that they look a little more rounded. Basically, just brighter highlights and darker shadows - right now everything in your drawing has more or less the same tonal value, so it flattens things out and makes it harder to read shapes.
:I fully agree, but these are more like a practise. Spending too much time on a preactice may ruin the practice itself. And I will try to put some real effort into them
And I completely disagree that spending too much time on practice is a bad thing. You should spend extra time on things while you're learning them - if you rush through them because they're "practice", you'll never learn the final steps and your pieces will look incomplete. Take your time and pay attention to what you're doing and you'll naturally get faster at it.