It's a little song I wrote...kind of shy to share it with anyone where I live because of the bible-belt, but here it goes. Hit me with constructive criticism, and hum your own tune to it.
"Man is the author of confusion.
Convey your thoughts,
Establish what's illusion.
If you look for it, you'll find it.
So nobodies wrong.
But nobody is right.
Destitution.
Our Holy evolution.
I'll protect your faith.
But get it out of my face.
Hear me out God!
Was logic your design
To test our loyalty?
Are you there at all?
Or are you from man?
A concept of balance?
Can you hear me?
Am I talking to a doll?
I'd understand,
I can empathize.
An eternal creator
Incomparable in size-
Would bide to choose,
Fortifying silence.
Doesn't mean he don't exist,
But will you take that chance?
I'm not dull!
I can see the light!
But what's the source of it?
Is it worth a fight?
Fanatics and I,
Fail to see eye to eye.
Does that justify,
In a lake of fire I'll die?
Hear me out God!
Was logic your design
To test our loyalty?
Are you there at all?
Or are you from man?
A concept of balance?
Can you hear me?
Am I talking to a doll?
I want
I want
Some Clarity.
(Rather than nothing at all)
But I need
I need
Connectivity.
(Unlike a child to a doll)
I could anthropomorphize
Material earth and skies
Just to allude to grace
Till I'm blue in the face
I understand His role,
He needs to touch my soul,
I need believe it first,
Please help me quench my thirst!
When you shun a kid's imagination,
When lifeless things gain imitation,
The unfortunate child is outnumbered,
And his emulation is now encumbered!
But when you do it to a base religion,
The armies of sheep within the region
Swallow up the opposition
Like a blindfolded cohesion!!!"
Thoughts?