Darkworld syndicate part 1

[BeamShank]

This is a script for a Flash animation that goes by the same name it's about an antisocial insomniac high school student named Cade and a ninja-esque lightsabre wielding shadow hunter named Abby . Also it doesn't really mention it in the script but Cade Is always wearing a big chunky pair of headphones, at least for the first few episodes. Anyway I'd love to hear your thoughts because my friends aren't really a valid opinion anymore because They're so exposed to it. once again, PLEASE leave your opinions and suggestions.

Dark world syndicate numero uno

*Cade lays down to go to bed*
(alarm rings)
X__X

(Cade is in class)
Classmate: woah, Ray you look like garbage.
*Cade looks over slowly without moving his head.*
Cade: ugghhh why does everyone care what I look like?
I don't HAVE to sleep if I don't want to.
*Abby raises an eyebrow*
*ray's eye twitches*
*Abby smiles to relieve the tension*
Cade thinks: uh oh! She smiled at me, uh... Say something cool!
*silence*
Cade: heh...
Cade turns To face the front of the classroom and rests his head on
his arms.
Cade thinks: Dammit. T_T
Another of Ray's classmates trys to initiate a conversation with him.
Captain Fagballs: heyyyyyyyyy Caaaaadddddddeeee.
Cade turns up the volume of his music to block him out.
*Abby looks confused*

Cade retreats to his room at home. You can tell that it's night time
through the window.
Cade plops on his bed.
*a bit later*
Cade is slowly defeated by sleep and closes his eyes.

(dreamworld visit)
Cade is sitting alone on the moon staring at the earth intently. This
is to symbolise his seperation with the rest of the world. After a
while he flops backward and lays lays on his back. Sadface.

Cade wakes up tired.

Cade is standing at the bus stop staring into space.
The bus blocks him from sight. As the bus leaves you notice that all
the kids who had been standing next to him are gone and he is still
oblivious.
Cade: ...wait, what?

Cade opens his garage.
Bike, surely YOU wouldn't fail me!
*bike falls over*
>__<

(cade is biking on a sidewalk)
He passes Abby.
Abby watches Cade dissappear over the horizon with a cold gaze.
Once Cade is gone she flees the scene at the speed of sound. (literally)

(Cade enters his 1st period classroom)
Cade notices Abby in her seat
Cade thinks: the hell? How did she get here first? Whatever, I could
really care less.

(Cade is biking home On a forest trail. He clearly notices Abby in
front of him.)
Cade thinks: how did she get ahead of me? ON FOOT! this makes no sen-
*Cade hits a log and is sent flying over his handle bars barreling
down a hill.
Cade blacks out for a moment.
When he opened his eyes he can see Abby standing over him.
Abby: are you okay?
Cade: um... Yep...
Abby: whew, that's a load off. You should take those headphones off
once in a while. You'd probably have more friends too.
Cade:... Yeah...
Abby: okay I gotta go, later.
Cade:... Bye.
(Abby walks off.)
Cade thinks: she's cool.
(Abby dissappears again once she's out of sight)

(Abby is in a dark room cluttered with computers)
Abby: what now?
(she is talking to the person occupying the computers.)
Person: Like... Kill it, man.
Abby: sigh...
Person: Tommorrow.
Abby: Ugh, seriously? I have a life.
Person: Then you can have fun being broke.
Abby: Lame.

End of part one I guess.

THANKS.

[BeamShank]

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