First time, first chapter

[Lolnoobcake]

Glad to see a writing thing up, now i can share what i have been working on perhapse? in anycase before i go any further, I hope some of you know of Writing.com (tons of stories, you wont find offensive stories unless you put 18+ as your age and search it). They have great interactive and plenty of creative opportunities, and i have posted some short things here and there.

but i am not hear to advertise, i want to share something i have not with writing. I recently read a book "The Stranger" that is a very odd protagonist wise. it inspired me to write a little nit bit called "Reaper" that deals with gang and corruption things. (if you don't like the sound of it, please turn to another forum now please.) its dark, but i have a feeling its good. would any of you be interested in reading it. I want to see interest before i post some of my more personal work here.

(The writing Noob)

[draco889]

well thats what the forum is for isnt it? and we would be delighted to

[Lolnoobcake]

Date: October 17, 2300

It was a cold, wet, and depressing day in the New York slums. Nothing out of order, the usual, and it seemed peaceful for the most part. But nowhere in New York was there peace. Sure there was the thief and the man trying to lure the youth into his car. But the main problem, or problems, was the gangs that hid in the alleys. They weren't molesting the youth nor stealing, were they making heavy deals on top notch drugs, whether they were liquids or solids or even gases. This place was called Gang Ally, and its exactly what it what the title is, a series, more of a maze of alley ways that the gangs literally owned. Each ally had a number, and the numbers organized gang meeting places, so no one ended up being in a battle they didn't set or with a gang that wants gas drug instead of liquid. Gang Ally had its usual dealers, but three spaces had been saved for only two gangs. They were called Reapers, and Undying.

The Reapers consisted of six members, one leader and five people behind him. The leader of Reapers was named Seth Arona; he was in the front of the five men behind him. He was newly an adult; he had turned eight-teen only two days ago. He wore a leather coat loosely; it hadn't been zipped up and hung on his shoulders. Under that were his dirty white t-shirt and some loose fitted jeans, in which the left pocket held his gun, the SB1mm pistol.

Behind him was a strong and equally tall Asian nick named Dynasty. He wore a half mask on the left side of his face, and had a half t-shirt that covered his right side. The other half of his body was exposed, he two wore jeans. On his back was his close combat weapon, the Energy Blade Gamma, a Katana like blade that was glowing an orange energy from the edge of the blade too its tip.

Behind dynasty was the third Reapers gang member, Tank. He was a tall, burly, and colored. He wore an over sized tan t-shirt with long sleeves, and carried a sub machine gun on his back called the MK-67, a major improvement to, yet modeled like the AK-47, and was actually accurate.

Behind Tank was Sharp Shot, Who also had the name Copy Cat because he looked a lot like Seth. He wore the same clothing, and the same leather coat, put he was cocation, and held two pistols instead of one. One was an Elite Uzi, that had a scope lends and red laser sight, much more than a standard issue Uzi. The other pistol was called the Semi-Sniper. It was a power shot, and an excellent scope shot that was a bit easier to handle then a two handed one.

Behind him was Ninja, a white, short, yet rather bulky member of the group. His weapon, with the training of judo, karate, Kung-fu and anything in the way of close combat, is the Energy Glove Gamma. The person having this glove only needed one, as the energy from it pulsed through the entire body and made the person stronger. Gamma was considered the most powerful, and with Ninja and his close combat skills, he was a human weapon.

The last member behind Ninja was the only female of the group, whom they called Shocky. Her weapon was a LS Laser, a concentrated shock blast that acted like a tazer but much more fatal and more uses. Even though she was the only female in the group, she was just as powerful as the leader.

Seth Arona walked with them in line, splashing in small puddles on the side streets and tearing off a wanted poster of him. The top part that didn't come off said "Reaper". After a few more splashes and steps he came to a sudden halt right off the ally way. He looked left and right, his hand grabbing the butt of his weapon and his index finger loosely on the trigger. No one but him and his group was there.
"Think they chickened out?" Sharp Shot asked Seth.
"No, you don't spare a battle for your life, they are coming" Seth said not even looking back
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And sure enough they heard the several footsteps of the second gang, the one named Undying. They consisted of seven members, the leader didn't even bother to line up his men and they were all cluttered. The leader was Glem Flaim, he wore loose torn jeans and a sweatshirt with a hood, and it was colored black. It was much more then Ninja had, all he had was undies and jean shorts, nothing more, he believed clothing slowed him down. He had two heavy gunners much like tank, two pistol men including himself, a glove master like Ninja, a sword master like Dynasty, and one laser man much like Shocky.
"We'll look who's here, I thought I told you I'd bring eight members" Glem said smirking.
"We didn't want to win right off the bat" Seth said look down at his muddy leather shoes.
"You're quick and clever but that don't win battles here, strength prevails no matter what whosy what sit you have in your sleeve." Glem remarked.
"Well we will see today your wrong then" Seth said smirking and peering at his clustered group, he saw seven and thought to himself "where is number eight?"
Glem merely smirked and held his weapon by his side ready to make the first shot. The others quickly made for their weapons. It was about to get a whole lot more noisy.
"How much spunk did you bring to the table?" Glem asked
"Enough to beat you" Seth said, and with quick reaction, darted being a mailbox.
The battle has begun. He heard the ping of a pullet hitting the hard metal of the box, and everyone made way too their targets. The Blade masters dueled hard, the glove masters not far from, and the heavy gunners and pistol taking cover too fire at the right time. Seth kept ground, listening to the pings that were nearby, once stopped he looked around the corner of the box. He fired a few accurate rounds at not only the leader, but at some other heavy gunners and the other pistol man. He made sure not too hit Sharp Shot, who was doing like he was. Glem was sneaking around too the opposite corner in attempt too makes a blow on Seth, and win by killing the leader. As soon as Seth peeked, Glem took cover as he fired. He was almost there ready to blow Seth sky high, but then he made a splash in the puddles, and Seth fired a bullet straight at his head. And all fell silent, as Glem was shot right between the eyes. He hit the ground with a thud, and everyone, even the Reapers looked too sees the damage. But the eighth member of the Undying made his move. It was a female sniper with the most accurate sniper known, the SS2mm with silent shot, and a twenty mile range. He took aim at Seth, pointing it at his head. The others had continued fighting for a few minutes, and the sniper woman shot. Seth looked up, and for a second saw the bullet before blackness hit him. He was hit in the head, and not anyone heard him get shot, for the silent bullet made no sound. No one knew, that now, it was a tie.