hum, so right now I'm in the process of creating characters for a comic
he's supposed to be the main character
I'll continue to post the sketches of the characters here
so please do give critique, if you see anything wrong or if there's any room for amelioration then tell me please.
this one is a detective.
thanks :)
Hooray for chin beards.
I like it. Is the final going to be in grayscale or will it all be coloured?
At 1/23/10 03:42 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Hooray for chin beards.
I like it. Is the final going to be in grayscale or will it all be coloured?
hooray for manly beards : D
well finale and finale; im not really going to work anymore on this one
it's just a sketch
At 1/23/10 03:46 PM, ciliath wrote: well finale and finale; im not really going to work anymore on this one
it's just a sketch
I mean the actual comic. Grayscale or colour for that one?
At 1/23/10 03:48 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:At 1/23/10 03:46 PM, ciliath wrote: well finale and finale; im not really going to work anymore on this oneI mean the actual comic. Grayscale or colour for that one?
it's just a sketch
haha right sorry
well, it is to see
if i can get someone else to collaborate with me and do the coloring, it'll be great.
else i believe it will be grayscale, cause coloring takes a lot of time
wow, thats reeeaaally good! the shadow effect is astounding throughout the entire photo, but if i did have to make on asses of positive critisism, it would be to add more detail on the face. Its still reeeaaally good, and you should definitly upload more ^.^
At 1/25/10 07:11 PM, nebsta wrote: wow, thats reeeaaally good! the shadow effect is astounding throughout the entire photo, but if i did have to make on asses of positive critisism, it would be to add more detail on the face. Its still reeeaaally good, and you should definitly upload more ^.^
thankies :'D
i will upload more, once this week is over that is >_>
here is a new pic of our detective
me and my buddy actually decided to call him Jace ^^
so here you have jace, without his detective hat :P
next i will have to make a mood meme -.-
it's gonna be hard, have never done one before...
anyways, if you think anything is faulty, do tell
At 1/23/10 03:54 PM, ciliath wrote:At 1/23/10 03:48 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:haha right sorryAt 1/23/10 03:46 PM, ciliath wrote: well finale and finale; im not really going to work anymore on this oneI mean the actual comic. Grayscale or colour for that one?
it's just a sketch
well, it is to see
if i can get someone else to collaborate with me and do the coloring, it'll be great.
else i believe it will be grayscale, cause coloring takes a lot of time
hmm iv recently been collaborating, colouring some peoples work and its so far been fun, your comic is a just for fun deal right? i may be interested, anyway your grayscale shading is good, theres nothing really wrong with anything i see here so far
At 1/28/10 03:20 PM, ciliath wrote: here is a new pic of our detective
me and my buddy actually decided to call him Jace ^^
He reminds me of brad pitt in Se7en...
on the downside that also means he would be young for a detective... so unless that is of significance to the story, id suggest to make him look a bit older
NEVER LOOSE FAITH IN MANCUNT
At 1/28/10 03:25 PM, J-qb wrote:At 1/28/10 03:20 PM, ciliath wrote: here is a new pic of our detectiveHe reminds me of brad pitt in Se7en...
me and my buddy actually decided to call him Jace ^^
on the downside that also means he would be young for a detective... so unless that is of significance to the story, id suggest to make him look a bit older
eh brat pitt :p
well, i actually wanted him to be a young detective ^^
At 1/28/10 03:24 PM, ashman112 wrote:At 1/23/10 03:54 PM, ciliath wrote:hmm iv recently been collaborating, colouring some peoples work and its so far been fun, your comic is a just for fun deal right? i may be interested, anyway your grayscale shading is good, theres nothing really wrong with anything i see here so farAt 1/23/10 03:48 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:haha right sorryAt 1/23/10 03:46 PM, ciliath wrote: well finale and finale; im not really going to work anymore on this oneI mean the actual comic. Grayscale or colour for that one?
it's just a sketch
well, it is to see
if i can get someone else to collaborate with me and do the coloring, it'll be great.
else i believe it will be grayscale, cause coloring takes a lot of time
yeah, comic is for fun while i strive for improvement at the same time
so i took the liberty to look at your coloring, and i must humbly decline.
sorry, i don't think your experienced enough yet
thanks anyways :)
At 1/28/10 03:32 PM, ciliath wrote: yeah, comic is for fun while i strive for improvement at the same time
so i took the liberty to look at your coloring, and i must humbly decline.
sorry, i don't think your experienced enough yet
thanks anyways :)
meh, its your choice, i was only gunna do it for practice, but if you want perfect colouring on it then good luck finding someone
ps the stuff on my art page is crap :)
a little portrait of the heroine ... maybe >_>
hasn't been decided yet.
she's supposed to be a sporty one, so i thought a wild hairstyle should match.
else I haven't had the time to do a mood meme yet :c
but hey, the first page is nearly completed :'D
anyhow, do you think anything is missing ?
