At 9/18/10 07:53 PM, Luxembourg wrote:
Holy shit, Dalenbourg lives?
Feedback is nice.
Glad you remember me, bro :)
For your WIP, I have some feedback.
The hair is brilliant, I never have the capacity for that sort of shadow and light mixture...
Very awesome colour choice, it really gives off a warm radiance. May I suggest a purple somewhere to contrast things?
The tree is wispy cool, yo.
On the face of the woman, shading should be existent across the whole face, because right now the mouth and left eye look like symbols, not features. keep the shadows warm as to fit in with the rest of the colour scheme. This will make it flow together well.
Keep at it, yo, I want to see this in its complete gloriousness.