Exzeta`s Manor

[exzeta]

Hello, Welcome to my art thread. I will post art When I Can, It wont be updated Daily, just when i can update it, Beacuse Sometimes I cannot Use my Computer.

My art is not Great, But I will post it, just to receive Constructive Criticism.

And now I will start With some (not so good) Art

My old Logo (The one I used for Games) Looked like This

But the one I am gonna use now is this:

; Not awesome but IMO it has improved.

[Joshsouza]

At 12/21/09 11:07 PM, exzeta wrote: Hello, Welcome to my art thread. I will post art When I Can, It wont be updated Daily, just when i can update it, Beacuse Sometimes I cannot Use my Computer.

My art is not Great, But I will post it, just to receive Constructive Criticism.

And now I will start With some (not so good) Art

My old Logo (The one I used for Games) Looked like This

But the one I am gonna use now is this:

; Not awesome but IMO it has improved.

It looks a little boring really and reminded me of the Armor Games Logo but I think it is too basic. You should add more things to it and it will probably come out good if you do that! :)

[exzeta]

It looks a little boring really and reminded me of the Armor Games Logo but I think it is too basic. : You should add more things to it and it will probably come out good if you do that! :)

Yeah but it is just a logo.

Here is A dinosaur i Drew to test shading in photoshop.

[Joshsouza]

At 12/21/09 11:24 PM, exzeta wrote:

It looks a little boring really and reminded me of the Armor Games Logo but I think it is too basic. : You should add more things to it and it will probably come out good if you do that! :)

Yeah but it is just a logo.

Here is A dinosaur i Drew to test shading in photoshop.

Yeah, I already criticized that in your other art forum. Why don't you post on your other one?

[exzeta]

Yeah, I already criticized that in your other art forum. Why don't you post on your other one?

Cause that was just for the dinosaur. And here I will post ALL my art.

[exzeta]

Also here is a wallpaper i made
Full Size, If you want one like that PM me And tell me which color do you want

[Galante]

At 12/21/09 11:24 PM, exzeta wrote:

It looks a little boring really and reminded me of the Armor Games Logo but I think it is too basic. : You should add more things to it and it will probably come out good if you do that! :)

Yeah but it is just a logo.

Here is A dinosaur i Drew to test shading in photoshop.

Its pretty good, but it need one leg and one amr more.

[Gerbil]

I like the style of that desktop one, but as for your other art, you need to put more perspective, depth, and more details.

[exzeta]

At 12/29/09 01:03 AM, SuperGerbal wrote: I like the style of that desktop one, but as for your other art, you need to put more perspective, depth, and more details.

Thanks, the desktop one was made in PS.
Also i know i forgot the leg and arm in the dinosaur.

[exzeta]

Here is a mummy.

[JKAmovies]

Your drawings are pretty good. . . But there seems to be quite a lot of anatomy problems that could help improve the way your art looks if fixed.

P:S - I love that wallpaper piece you did, very nice :)

[Lemmiwinks91]

At 1/5/10 05:31 AM, JKAmovies wrote: Your drawings are pretty good. . . But there seems to be quite a lot of anatomy problems that could help improve the way your art looks if fixed.

P:S - I love that wallpaper piece you did, very nice :)

Agreed.

I dont think your wallpaper piece is amazing, just a through scribbly lines and some dots. But if it had some straight lines trying to make it look 3d. So they all extrude from a vanishing point.

Keep it up

[exzeta]

At 1/5/10 05:31 AM, JKAmovies wrote: Your drawings are pretty good. . . But there seems to be quite a lot of anatomy problems that could help improve the way your art looks if fixed.

P:S - I love that wallpaper piece you did, very nice :)

Yeah Ive been trying improving my anatomy
;D thanks the wallpaper was an easy one.

Agreed.

I dont think your wallpaper piece is amazing, just a through scribbly lines and some dots. But if it had some straight lines trying to make it look 3d. So they all extrude from a vanishing point.

Keep it up

Thats exactly what it is, but with glow.

:D people like my art (not that much but still) thank you for the feedback, But i still need MORE.

:KTNHXLOL

[exzeta]

A header from a tutorial i am making.

Suggestions?

[CloudEater]

At 1/13/10 10:53 PM, exzeta wrote: A header from a tutorial i am making.

Suggestions?

You seem to be alot better at design than art, this header and the backround look really professional while the dinosaur and the mummy just look like some kids drawings coloured in digitally.

[exzeta]

At 1/13/10 11:23 PM, CloudEater wrote:

At 1/13/10 10:53 PM, exzeta wrote: A header from a tutorial i am making.

Suggestions?

You seem to be alot better at design than art, this header and the backround look really professional : while the dinosaur and the mummy just look like some kids drawings coloured in digitally.

Lulz. Im guess im somehow a kid. And yeah the header is better.

[exzeta]

Comic here. Its in spanish tough.
Link cause the image may be 2 big.

[bigjonny13]

At 1/28/10 08:06 PM, exzeta wrote: Comic here. Its in spanish tough.

Hrmm, lets see if I can get the dialogue right...
"This is my first comic
I know you're expecting something interesting
But no"
Then I got lost

[exzeta]

At 1/28/10 08:13 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 1/28/10 08:06 PM, exzeta wrote: Comic here. Its in spanish tough.

Hrmm, lets see if I can get the dialogue right...
"This is my first comic
I know you're expecting something interesting
But no"
Then I got lost

Yes. then he (me) says:

"The only thing you get, is a bad drawing, and some text on a dirty page (i think its called sheet in english), which is badly scanned, which is in a crappy notebook, and it isnt even straight ( i think thats what the closest translation to "recta" would be), dont expect nothing else than this in other comics...
... except for them being more awesome of course"

[GMoose14]

At 1/28/10 08:13 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 1/28/10 08:06 PM, exzeta wrote: Comic here. Its in spanish tough.

Hrmm, lets see if I can get the dialogue right...
"This is my first comic
I know you're expecting something interesting
But no"
Then I got lost

What he says in the rest is that "the only thing you get is a crappy drawing on notebook paper with inserted text. It's badly scanned and a little tilted, don't expect too much more from future comics.
...and a bit of humor of course."

Yeah that's pretty much what is says am I right?

[GMoose14]

....dang. exzeta beat me to it, okay everyone disregard what I said before and sorry for the double post.

[exzeta]

At 1/28/10 08:27 PM, GMoose14 wrote:

At 1/28/10 08:13 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 1/28/10 08:06 PM, exzeta wrote: Comic here. Its in spanish tough.

Hrmm, lets see if I can get the dialogue right...
"This is my first comic
I know you're expecting something interesting
But no"
Then I got lost

What he says in the rest is that "the only thing you get is a crappy drawing on notebook paper with inserted text. It's badly scanned and a little tilted, don't expect too much more from future comics.
...and a bit of humor of course."

Yeah that's pretty much what is says am I right?

DINGDINGDING we have a winner. i will translate my following comics to english, and even make some exclusive english ones (Y`know because some puns can only be made in english)

[GMoose14]

Yeah that's true just like some jokes can only be in spanish. So you speak spanish right? Cuz if you do so do I! ( I know this is irrelevant to the thread but in a search for knowledge one must sometimes ask what is necessary)

[exzeta]

At 1/28/10 08:33 PM, GMoose14 wrote: Yeah that's true just like some jokes can only be in spanish. So you speak spanish right? Cuz if you do so do I! ( I know this is irrelevant to the thread but in a search for knowledge one must sometimes ask what is necessary)

Yes, i speak spanish, and im from guatemala, its good to see other people speak spanish.

[exzeta]

1ST ENGLISH COMIC!!
LINK

caps

[Tribal]

At 12/21/09 11:14 PM, Joshsouza wrote: It looks a little boring really and reminded me of the Armor Games Logo but I think it is too basic. You should add more things to it and it will probably come out good if you do that! :)

I wouldn't go so far as calling this boring but I'd rate it a 6.5/10. I like the wings a lot, good job, but you could have maybe done a bit more with the V.

[exzeta]

I wouldn't go so far as calling this boring but I'd rate it a 6.5/10. I like the wings a lot, good job, but you
could have maybe done a bit more with the V.

Yeah but i dont know how.

[exzeta]

Robot I made for Industry class (I think its called that way, Its like art class but they teach you how to use T-Rulers, set squares, etc.) I was asked to do something with mostly straight lines, sorry for the bad quality it was taken from my phone, i will scan it when i get it... um i dont know how to say something like after i get my score from it.
It looks better smaller but Bigger Version if you want it.

[exzeta]

Sorry for the blank space at the robot one, i wanted to crop it but i did it wrong.

[exzeta]

Say what was it that you were aloud to draw only in straight lines subject wise in that class project?
The machine seems abit Robotron-ish

Yes MOSTLY straight lines I had to use my T-Ruler and set squares to draw it.