At 11/4/14 04:28 PM, Havegum wrote:
I spent almost all my free time today on this:
It's looking good.
If you are going to continue work on this piece, I recommend you redo the interior of the car, the biggest issue seem to be the seats being too far apart. I tried looking up some pictures of cars, but I weren't able to find a picture that illustrated the issue well enough, if I were in your shoes I would find a car, roll down the window and try take a few pictures from the same angle, get some friends help and get them to pose as you want and you will have the perfect reference.
EDIT: on another note, I would also change the composition a little, moving the girl off-center to the left and make the man driving less eye-catching than the girl, maybe make the give the red pillar in the background some lines towards the girl to bring out the depth more and to give some lines for the observer to follow.