My Pencil Drawings for 2009

[Hyper-Shadow-Death]

Hey everyone I've been drawing anime for a while now and wanna get some feedback from ya.
Anyways the first one is a drawing from the Bleach series, Captain Hitsugaya. I remixed the shit out of him because I think his character has so much potential but they made him a child in the series. So here's my original version of him!

[GrumpyTom]

Hey :)
That looks pretty cool, Don't know much about the character but the top he's wearing seems to obscure his anatomy with all those ruffles. Not saying that was intended but perhaps a bit more definition on where his arm is in that vast sea of cloth. I also think the hands a little too small but that's easily fixable :)

[Hyper-Shadow-Death]

Thank you for the feedback! I see what you mean the shoulder on the far side is too high for the anatomy of this pictures perspective to be right. At first I did this intentionally but when I look at it now it would've made more sense to drop the height on that side lower to match the perspective. Im not very good at drawing clothing yet but that'll definitely help me out in the future :)