come critique game Jerks welcome :)

[EqualToCody]

hey!
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3309/652 44_roughDraft.php

here you go! the first three levels of my game. Throughout the game you will be bringing color back. Theres allot of stuff to work on still and a couple flaws that will obviate themselves, but let me know what you think.

say whatever you want, it's a safe zone here.

[Version2]

WAD keys don't work, just arrow keys

[Version2]

Either make the player respawn automatically, or put up instructions that say you need to press space to respawn

[Version2]

Oh nevermind, I see where it says press space to try again, sorry bout that. Although auto respawn might be nice.

[TheAutocrat]

No reason to be a jerk here.
It's a pretty good game.

Just fix the ASWD thing, or either take it off the controls.

[EqualToCody]

sweet. yeah, it'll be easy to fix the wasd thing, i just need to do it.

how was game play were the levels too easy hard?

[Zealotti]

3rd door along on the bottom floor is really annoying in that I found it difficult to jump onto the higher-platforms because there is a platform directly above your head. You can also get stuck underneath part, if you just walk off one of the platforms, I don't really have time to take a picture atm, will try to remember tomorrow.

[Yambanshee]

At 11/22/09 10:18 PM, Zealotti wrote: You can also get stuck underneath part, if you just walk off one of the platforms

i got that as well. also, i got all the hearts and the door went open, but then i died. But when i hit space i spawn outside the level with the level saying its over.

[EqualToCody]

At 11/22/09 10:38 PM, Yambanshee wrote:

At 11/22/09 10:18 PM, Zealotti wrote: You can also get stuck underneath part, if you just walk off one of the platforms

i got that as well. also, i got all the hearts and the door went open, but then i died. But when i hit space i spawn outside the level with the level saying its over.

no need for screen cap, i found that.

Thanks guys. I figure I'll redo the third level.
i was unaware of the last bug with all the hearts and space, thanks for finding that.

[dailyderek]

Amazingly done, posting this on newgrounds its sure to win a fornt page, only I didnt myself much like the gameplay or even more the grpahics, there's effort and enough content for lots of people to enjoy great job!

[EqualToCody]

At 11/23/09 12:41 AM, dailyderek wrote: Amazingly done, posting this on newgrounds its sure to win a fornt page, only I didnt myself much like the gameplay or even more the grpahics, there's effort and enough content for lots of people to enjoy great job!

Thanks! I have a story line to back it and i hope it will do well. It's taken along time, because I'm learning flash but i hope it goes well.

[Nayhan]

Just in case there are other parts where one gets stuck you should add a reset button.
Looks pretty good though, a good story will make the game a lot better and make sure to choose the right music as it will also change the goodness of your game quite a bit.

[EqualToCody]

At 11/23/09 01:08 AM, Nayhan wrote: Just in case there are other parts where one gets stuck you should add a reset button.
Looks pretty good though, a good story will make the game a lot better and make sure to choose the right music as it will also change the goodness of your game quite a bit.

good point. how would i best do music? I dont have any midi controllers. Perhaps team up with someone? How do i do that? people in forums are nasty. Maybe use open source music?

[Nayhan]

At 11/23/09 01:12 AM, EqualToCody wrote:

At 11/23/09 01:08 AM, Nayhan wrote: Just in case there are other parts where one gets stuck you should add a reset button.
Looks pretty good though, a good story will make the game a lot better and make sure to choose the right music as it will also change the goodness of your game quite a bit.

good point. how would i best do music? I dont have any midi controllers. Perhaps team up with someone? How do i do that? people in forums are nasty. Maybe use open source music?

Well your best option is probably to just find some stuff on the audio portal that emphasises the mood of the game, you could make a thread but not many audio artists go to the BBS.
If you do want to work with an audio artist on it then your best option would be to find someone you like the sound of and PM them. Box-Killa will most likely be able to create some beats for you.