Help! Picture Included this time ;]

[AlbinoDonk]

I feel like I missed something, But I cant put my finger on it.
:C

[bigjonny13]

Pupils?
Shading?
Fingers and toes?

[AlbinoDonk]

At 11/19/09 10:52 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Pupils?
Shading?
Fingers and toes?

No wayyy, I don't need those things.
Screw toes.
I mean like, It looks like i smudged something and messed it up like it bothers my eyes but i cant find it.

Maybe I'm just imagining.

[FlashyGregory]

At 11/19/09 10:52 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Pupils?
Shading?
Fingers and toes?

Pupils and toes are foolish endevors.
Shading however can almost always improve a drawing.
And the tower roofs are pretty sloppy looking and the castle itself blends into the mountains too much. It would look alot better if the mountains stopped after the 1st 3 on the left.

[Leidolfr]

At 11/19/09 10:23 PM, AlbinoDonk wrote: I feel like I missed something, But I cant put my finger on it.

C

add pupils, some white spots on them to make it look like theyre wet, like eyes are

shade in only slightly if you're worried about it, but a little can go a long way

some of the lines need to be cleaned up, the thickness of the lines vary, and some objects, like the sun, are a little off

also that space of just sky should be either a smaller cloud, to make it look like its at a distance, that will add some depth to it, so you feel like the sky goes on, and its not a d dimensional drawing, also, maybe some whisps in the sky, the sky is different shades of blue and white, it isnt really a solid blue