were r they?

[magnet202]

WHERE ARE MY PANCAKES??? WERE R THEY?

[bigjonny13]

They're hiding, because you USED THE PAINTBUCKET TOOL AND FORGOT TO FILL IN THOSE WHITE LINES!!!

[magnet202]

how do i fill them in?

[magnet202]

ok i think i got it now

[magnet202]

what else can i do to make this better?

[Snowman]

At 11/14/09 03:21 PM, magnet202 wrote: what else can i do to make this better?

imo? Delete it...

But, ill be nice and actually suggest something
Thinner lines
Draw the nose better, go online and look up a picture or a real nose, becasue it looks like someone took a sharpie and drew lines on his face and drilled two holes
Eyes are not triangles
hair does not have flat lines
Eyebrows are not flat
faces are not made up of lines, they're curved

what else could I include

[Little-Eise]

At 11/14/09 03:21 PM, magnet202 wrote: what else can i do to make this better?

Read books and tutorials about drawing, but mostly practice, practice, practice.

[magnet202]

here, i made some of the changes you suggested.

[Snowman]

At 11/14/09 04:49 PM, magnet202 wrote: here, i made some of the changes you suggested.

much better, however, The nose and eyes are still messed up

people dont have V-s as eyes

[magnet202]

how do i make crying eyes?

[magnet202]

i think i made it a little bit better with the nose

[Snowman]

At 11/14/09 05:35 PM, magnet202 wrote: i think i made it a little bit better with the nose

now you got the idea

[magnet202]

assuming you use gimp, how do i make an ellipse?

[Snowman]

At 11/14/09 05:47 PM, magnet202 wrote: assuming you use gimp, how do i make an ellipse?

that one, i cannot answer

i dont use gimp

[magnet202]

well thanx anyway

[magnet202]

o ya. i'm a genius. i made the ellipse on mspaint, opened it on gimp, and blurred it just a bit to make it look like on gimp XD

[Ashman]

the first one looked like asci art the newest one looks cartoony and im gunna say the pancakes are in his big puffy hair, colour may help but only if its done right, same with adding a body

[Daverom]

The pancakes are right there, they are just to tiny to see!

Microscopic so to speak......
I knew I'd be able to work that into a conversation eventually....

[magnet202]

how long have you been waiting for the opportunity?

[Ashman]

At 11/14/09 06:06 PM, M-Vero wrote: The pancakes are right there, they are just to tiny to see!

Microscopic so to speak......
I knew I'd be able to work that into a conversation eventually....

yay *applauses m-vero lol

[Daverom]

At 11/14/09 06:12 PM, magnet202 wrote: how long have you been waiting for the opportunity?

Since shameless self promotion

[RNNR]

His expression is... not really expressive.
Only his eyebrows reveal he's distraught about his missing breakfast.

You're going for cartoony, so exaggerate.

I don't think Bauhaus works here, you want the text to be readable at first glance and this kind of hampers it.
Whatever you do though, don't use Comic Sans.

If you do I will find out where you live and kill your dog (or any other suitable alternative).

[magnet202]

and to all who tell me to add color and a body: this was originally going to be a design for a t-shirt and with all the improvement on it, i may be.

[magnet202]

WITH UPDATED!!!!!!!!

new eyebrows. ftw wooooooot!

[Knocturne]

WHERE ARE THEY?!

[magnet202]

nice.

[Herospirit]

Nocturne, nice rendition. :P
And magnet, that's the most improvement from one person Ive seen in a single thread. May I suggest some tears for the eyes?

[magnet202]

mmkay

[Knocturne]

At 11/14/09 07:46 PM, Herospirit wrote: Nocturne, nice rendition. :P

Nocturne posted one too?

[magnet202]

ok i got tears. doesn't make much difference from what i can see