i need critism

[blacc45]

right now im just trying to see if im as good as other people say i am.

[Sagawa]

Seems pretty good to me. Boring but good.

[Spags]

It's alright.
Try varying your line thicknesses and also, maybe add a color element into it.
Not the whole thing necessarily, but maybe 1 or 2 colors sprinkled in.
Also, you could add in a different element on each side so it's not exactly symmetrical.
It's kind of like this poster, which is from the band "The Dead Weather".
It's not the exact poster I was trying to find, but it has the same theme in it, see how it's symmetrical at the top but then at the bottom it's not.

[CloudEater]

It ok but is a bit boring. You should add some sort of colour at least.

[YouriX]

Not bad! I like it.
But im not loving it. Probly a taste thing you should try coloring it im a sucker for colors!
But in your case not to much colors!

[PeterSatera]

It's good but it just needs more aggression in those lines. You're portraying a beast of some sort, so try really emphasise it through your work. You definetly have patience though, especially to do one side and then trace it to make it symetrical.

Just less following a pattern with those strokes and maybe a bit more composition thought before confirming the fine line. I would like to see more. :)

[Dahakka]

you should vectorize it so you can mess around with it, try some stuff that Spaghetti14 says. changing line thickness can give a foreshortening effect, adding depth and perspective. it will really make it look alot more interesting and not so generic.

[PaNicATtaCk64]

Color...
Not necessarily it would look good with really stark black and white with a few bits of grey...

[blacc45]

yeah im workin on that as i type this but im thinkin red and black ill poest it as soon AS I get home to scan it