Poetry Compettition!

[Girly789]

I was bored.... so I thought I'd ask some people to write some love poetry.

I can't really give a reward..... but hey, it's a fun way to express yourselves!

MINE:

I can't see the light,
I can't see the day,
All that I have,
Has faded away,
Except for you.

I don't if you love me back,
Or if you even care,
So I ask you, will you share the anwer with me tonight?

Light up my world,
Fill my heart,
Show me if you love me too,
I love you.

[Blush]

Here's a spin on an old poem that a friend told me:

Roses are red
Violents are blue
With a broom
I shall rape you.

[Innermike]

When im around you i blush
When im around you i spy
When im around you i feel hard but i just dont know why

Would you spare just one minute
Just one just to talk
I wanted to see you but whimped out then i walked

Now i feel much stronger
Brave , fearless and strong
And for the love of god i hope i do nothing wrong

I walked up to you
I smiled and i waved
We talked for an hour , made love...

I am saved

Holy fuck i cant believe i just wrote that shit !

[ThePortalGuru]

1:07

1:07, 1:07,
It's always fucking 1:07.
No matter how many times
I've tried to change the time,
It always goes back to fucking 1:07.
Not even 1:11, or 1:27,
The number's always 1:07.

And I scream and I throw the clock
Against the cold gray block
That is my chamber wall.
But it just doesn't change,
For the clock (so deranged)
Still reads 1:07.

I feel so alone in this room,
Isolation's a neverending doom.
And no matter how hard I've tried,
And no matter how much I've cried,
The time is still fucking 1:07.

[Innermike]

At 11/1/09 11:03 AM, ThePortalGuru wrote: 1:07...

He said love poetry

[ThePortalGuru]

At 11/1/09 11:30 AM, hdxmike wrote:

At 11/1/09 11:03 AM, ThePortalGuru wrote: 1:07...

He said love poetry

It is love.

[HighWay]

It's time for our military institution!
to teach you about our Constitution!

[SteveGuzzi]

I don't know why I'm compelled to post this here.

This is a recent poem of my brother's. It's acrostic.

RHYMES OF GUISE UNLEASHING EXECUTION

Concealed Lies Of A Knife Anchored Nicely Deep
Down As Glorious Gore Ends Rife.

Decieve Everyone Changing Every Perception
That Is Overtly Not Suspicious Garnishing
ATheory Having Every Redemption.

Devious Inventions Seduce The Retracted
Attention Creating Time, Take Over All
Theatrics Then Act Covertly Kind.

Take Heed Extending Nothing Stupid Treacherous
Attention Brings, Its Nefarious To Hasten
Empires Bygone And Conquer Kings.

(c) 05.24.09 Damian Guzzi

I reaaalllly hope I formatted all that correctly.

The parts that aren't under a blood spatter reveal the sub-poem. He's done a bunch of these acrostics with different themes.

[Kanon]

that is just awesome, unfortunatly i have no poetry to share, because i am not a poet.

[BIush]

When near you I saw
"Oh what a nice day
To dance and sing
And to stretch my wings"

I take flight into your heart
I loved you from the very start
But you don't return my feelings
Now I'm crying into my knees, down I am kneeling.

I follow you everywhere
You just so beautiful, I must stare
I take notes into my book
Oh you're just such a great look

But something like you must be mine
We shall be together till the end of time
So I take this knife
And I shall end this strife

Together it shall end
And with this knife I shall send
It into your heart and mine
We will be together till the end of time

You scream now my love
But don't worry, for you and I shall end up above
I quiet you with a crush of the throat
And I write a nice little love note.
I love you.