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Fifty-50's improved art.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-12-30 23:59:46


At 12/30/10 11:30 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: Tarot Card!!!!

The details of the character are all very busy. The amount of wrinkles in his clothes combined with the fact that they're all so identical in size and color/shading is somewhat off-putting. Plus, there just wouldn't be that many wrinkles in most fabrics, especially fabrics that are that heavy.

Consider adding in a more defined direction of light. I mean, it would be fine to keep a diffused light, but I think a defined direction of light would have more impact, which is something that you want with an subject as powerful as "Justice." Just a suggestion. It may help with the wrinkle issue, too.

I think that it would could create more tonal cohesion if you put more of a tint of the blue from the background into the shadows that fall on the character's clothes/body. Ambient light from that would be nice, too.

I love the boarder and the background, though. Very tarot-card-esque. The background texture is a great backdrop. It's not so complex that it takes away from the character nor does it look like the character is floating in the middle of nothing. The character is framed by that blue well and composition-wise, I wouldn't change anything.


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whoa art what

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-12-31 00:05:05


At 12/30/10 11:59 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote: Awesome critique.

I've seen your critiques in other threads and I say they are very helpful. I'm glad you stopped by and posted your critique here. I'll keep in mind to not wrinkle fabric too much and define the light source too. I'm very delighted because I know your words will help to grow into a better artist. Maybe my next tarot card will be better. Thank you for stopping by again.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-12-31 00:20:23


At 12/30/10 11:30 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: Tarot Card!!!!

That turned out great, but the thing I don't get is why you cut off the scale. That's a crucial element and you had plenty of room to move him up and fit that in (or even just raise his hand so it would fit). At a quick glance, it reads like he's holding two swords... one up and one down. Was that intentional?

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-12-31 00:24:56


At 12/31/10 12:20 AM, ReNaeNae wrote:
At 12/30/10 11:30 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: Tarot Card!!!!
That turned out great, but the thing I don't get is why you cut off the scale. That's a crucial element and you had plenty of room to move him up and fit that in (or even just raise his hand so it would fit). At a quick glance, it reads like he's holding two swords... one up and one down. Was that intentional?

So you noticed. Yes, it was intentional. Because I can't really draw scales like that very well. It came with a scale but it was horribly disfigured and unrecognizable so I had to cut it. I did not find the will to edit the scale because I think it would make it worse.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-01 02:01:44


A sketch, or rather a background for the next piece I made. It's for this guy. I'm sure you've heard of him.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-01 02:06:08


More of the same pic.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-01 07:32:51


At 1/1/11 03:53 AM, ImpendingRiot wrote: This is really appealing to me. Not so much because of the subject matter, but the fact it's a style I rarely (if ever) have seen you do before. Your awesome at your linear stuff, with your cross hatching and insane linework, but this shows you're damned good at rendering things too. I don't know man, just not what I expected to see in your thread. A nice surprise and change of pace. Your other stuff is still looking great though. I got high hopes for ya.

Thank you so much Riot sir! I say I'm a fan of your works and it's a big honor for me to here or read rather, from you.Thank you so much. I'll continue to work on my art until I reach the end of my skill level. And maybe do some animations.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-01 22:19:01


So I've been browsing over at the *Art Collaboration Thread* and found a wonderful line art by Thies. I decided to color it. WIP

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-02 11:04:59


Sup.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-02 12:26:11


At 1/2/11 11:04 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Sup.

Dear god please color it.


every morn I awake from the cavernous night

look at my pictures

look at pictures I look at

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-02 22:13:12


At 1/2/11 12:26 PM, DemocracyFTW wrote: Dear god please color it.

Sup.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-03 21:57:23


I'm drawin' with flash. A design of a superhero I'm doing.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-03 22:52:32


At 1/3/11 09:57 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: I'm drawin' with flash. A design of a superhero I'm doing.

Ooh, i like that. :3

That will be pretty cool, when colored, if thats what your going to do.
Yes, I dont know anything interesting or constructive to tell you.
Just that, for now, it looks really good, and from a guy that knows nothing about art, like half the people here, (despite the thousands of users in the Art Portal), Im just saying, it looks cool.

Ladeda, bye.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-04 00:56:50


At 1/3/11 10:52 PM, ItsRangasLife wrote: Ooh, i like that. :3

That will be pretty cool, when colored, if thats what your going to do.
Yes, I dont know anything interesting or constructive to tell you.
Just that, for now, it looks really good, and from a guy that knows nothing about art, like half the people here, (despite the thousands of users in the Art Portal), Im just saying, it looks cool.

Ladeda, bye.

Thank you! I appreciate it. All comments are always appreciated. May it be good or bad. Anyway, a WIP. On my alien collab submission.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-06 06:28:21


Moar super hero progress.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-06 08:23:57


At 1/6/11 06:28 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Moar super hero progress.

I like this bolder shading you are using, cant wait to see how this turns out.


NEVER LOOSE FAITH IN MANCUNT

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-07 08:19:57


At 1/6/11 08:23 AM, J-qb wrote: I like this bolder shading you are using, cant wait to see how this turns out.

Yup, I was going for a comic book style. Anyway lineart. Made with flash. Using a mouse. Thus proving that having flash and not having a tablet makes your drawing crappy is a complete lie.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-07 08:22:08


Friday flood. I thought I wasnt gonna do one but I did.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-07 08:25:45


Wip

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-07 08:49:10


At 1/7/11 08:22 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Friday flood. I thought I wasnt gonna do one but I did.

Frosty the asshole.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-07 09:50:14


At 1/7/11 08:25 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Wip

i like that lot but the left arm seems to be in a pointless position and the hands open as if hes holding something but nothings there? unless your adding something in.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-07 13:24:45


At 1/7/11 08:22 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Friday flood. I thought I wasnt gonna do one but I did.

Pretty badass!

Why I didn't made anything for this Friday Flood?

Who are you looking for? What are you looking at?

A light? a star. A boat? an insect. A plane? a flying fish

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-08 01:20:20


At 1/7/11 08:49 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Frosty the asshole.

Yup. That snowman

At 1/7/11 09:50 AM, n-nnnn wrote: i like that lot but the left arm seems to be in a pointless position and the hands open as if hes holding something but nothings there? unless your adding something in.

Nah, I think it's not that much of a mistake. Its just something for the heck of it. Nothing very noticeable.

At 1/7/11 01:24 PM, MasterMerol wrote: Pretty badass!
Why I didn't made anything for this Friday Flood?

Yeah, why didn't you make anything? I wish you did. I really do.

Derp.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-08 01:55:31


At 1/8/11 01:20 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Derp.

I like april the best.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-18 22:36:18


Just putting up stranth.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-18 22:37:26


At 1/18/11 10:36 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: Just putting up stranth.

Gnoll Rape :P


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-18 22:38:54


At 1/18/11 10:37 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: Gnoll Rape :P

Yup, my dad also accused me of drawing bestiality.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-18 22:57:07


At 1/18/11 10:38 PM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 1/18/11 10:37 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: Gnoll Rape :P
Yup, my dad also accused me of drawing bestiality.

you should have told him "No, this is bestiality"
and then googled furry porn..
I'm sure he'll be proud you haven't gone that far....


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-18 23:07:06


At 1/18/11 10:57 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:
At 1/18/11 10:38 PM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 1/18/11 10:37 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: Gnoll Rape :P
Yup, my dad also accused me of drawing bestiality.
you should have told him "No, this is bestiality"
and then googled furry porn..

Or just go to dA.
Say "look, Dad, THIS is bestiality"
You would have scarred your dad.

And maybe found him a new hobby.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2011-01-18 23:15:42


At 1/7/11 08:22 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Friday flood. I thought I wasnt gonna do one but I did.

Fucking beautiful.


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