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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 16th, 2010 @ 12:05 AM Reply

perspective on the tanks a bit off and the anatomy on the big guy too, bro.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 16th, 2010 @ 12:09 AM Reply

At 11/16/10 12:05 AM, homojesus wrote: perspective on the tanks a bit off and the anatomy on the big guy too, bro

Yeah, I think dad is supposed to be like that, (I think) but your right about the tank there. I should have planned my sketches more. Oh well, there is much room for more improvement.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 16th, 2010 @ 04:26 AM Reply

Second Green Line Collab.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 04:20 AM Reply

My take on JAZZA's Larry

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 10:38 AM Reply

Coloring Larry

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 10:45 AM Reply

At 11/17/10 04:20 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: My take on JAZZA's Larry

On his right hand, his thumb is horribly disfigured. You made it into a finger, because you extended it and gave it an extra joint.
Also, the meat of the hand where the thumb connects to the palm shouldn't be so big.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 10:48 AM Reply

At 11/17/10 10:45 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: On his right hand, his thumb is horribly disfigured. You made it into a finger, because you extended it and gave it an extra joint.
Also, the meat of the hand where the thumb connects to the palm shouldn't be so big.

Looks like I need more fixing up. I'll fix it right away sire!


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 12:01 PM Reply

The problem is fixed Cap Jonny!

Quick! Is there anything more that looks strange?

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 12:25 PM Reply

At 11/17/10 12:01 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: The problem is fixed Cap Jonny!
Quick! Is there anything more that looks strange?

I think his right leg should be a bit higher... either that or he is basically standing with his ass pushed backwards... not really little knight-like


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 12:27 PM Reply

At 11/17/10 12:01 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: The problem is fixed Cap Jonny!
Quick! Is there anything more that looks strange?

Hrmm, it's better, but still looks a little off.
Take a look at this fist.
The thumb only has two joints as oppose to three in the rest of the fingers.
Also the thumb is much shorter, just meeting the middle of the middle finger.
The meat of the thumb is also not as thick, especially when gripping a weapon.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 12:36 PM Reply

Lol Seeing everyone critique his art I'm like D: "but he's so much better than I am!!" I take one look and I'm in awe, I can't find mistakes until someone points them out. <.<

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 12:38 PM Reply

At 11/17/10 12:25 PM, J-qb wrote: I think his right leg should be a bit higher... either that or he is basically standing with his ass pushed backwards... not really little knight-like

Will do sir! I'll fix it! Surgery complete.

It's pretty hard to do these adjustments, considering I only work with a mouse, but I'll take it as a challange.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 12:51 PM Reply

At 11/17/10 12:38 PM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 11/17/10 12:25 PM, J-qb wrote: I think his right leg should be a bit higher... either that or he is basically standing with his ass pushed backwards... not really little knight-like
Will do sir! I'll fix it! Surgery complete.
It's pretty hard to do these adjustments, considering I only work with a mouse, but I'll take it as a challange.

I meant that it should meet his torso a bit higher; I also think his upper arm is bit thin, and the sword hilt is off-center.
Made a paintover (also redrew the thumb)

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 17th, 2010 @ 01:10 PM Reply

More adjustments. :P

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 07:45 AM Reply

For the flood.

Coloring it later.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 07:50 AM Reply

Reborn!

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 07:57 AM Reply

At 11/18/10 07:45 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: For the flood.
Coloring it later.

"Excuse me, waiter, there's an octopus in my martini"
- Oh, I'm terribly sorry sir
"You should be, I asked for a squid"

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 10:38 AM Reply

At 11/18/10 07:57 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: "Excuse me, waiter, there's an octopus in my martini"
- Oh, I'm terribly sorry sir
"You should be, I asked for a squid"

Lol, awesome joke Jonny. More Larry.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 04:38 PM Reply

At 11/18/10 10:38 AM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 11/18/10 07:57 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: "Excuse me, waiter, there's an octopus in my martini"
- Oh, I'm terribly sorry sir
"You should be, I asked for a squid"
Lol, awesome joke Jonny. More Larry.

Well, I dont know if you used a reference or anything, but the way he is holding the dagger is weird.
To me it looks like its going through his hand
The bump in his hand, thanks to the position of his thumb, makes said bump more prominent, but a lot of it should still be in shadow, which is i think whats making it look weird.

I just read over what I just wrote, and I hardly understand it myself :|
But after messing around with the image, i realized his thumb was really long...

Sorry, pic for explanation

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 11:20 PM Reply

At 11/18/10 04:38 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: Awesome explanation

Yeah I know I have been having with the hands ever since I started this drawing. I'll fix it right away. Thank you for pointing it out. I should start using a pencil instead of drawing directly with a pen. Honestly, I don't know what I'll do without you guys.

At 11/18/10 12:50 PM, FelixCurran wrote: Your work is awesome, I just checked out this entire thread and you can really see the improvement! I was wondering though, do you just sketch these on paper and scan them onto computer or do you use a graphics tablet or what?

I don't have a tablet, our family income isn't enough to cover for such luxuries. Even our computer is only a gift. I can't afford a tablet sadly. I only draw in paper, scanned it and colored it. That was my process ever since I started.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 19th, 2010 @ 07:00 AM Reply

At 11/19/10 06:12 AM, FelixCurran wrote: That's some great stuff man. The sketches without the colour added are absolutely amazing. I'm doing a games development course at Uni at the minute and i'm doing a little bit of drawing, i'm interested but i'm not that great. Someday I hope to be half as good as you.

Skill comes with practice. If you work hard enough, you can get your skills quickly. Thanks for the compliments. More larry, fixed the hand, put a background. Gonna add blood later.

Something about the background is bugging me.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 19th, 2010 @ 08:21 AM Reply

I like it... Now get back to work on the green line collab!

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 19th, 2010 @ 10:47 AM Reply

At 11/19/10 08:21 AM, BrainworkInProgress wrote: I like it... Now get back to work on the green line collab!

I don't know why you would want me to make another one.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 19th, 2010 @ 11:50 AM Reply

I ended up removing the blood, because it was as messy as hell. I'd avoid drawing things with blood now until I master the technique. Finished Product?

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 19th, 2010 @ 12:09 PM Reply

Looks awesome & you're right, it looks better without the blood.

GJ you!

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 19th, 2010 @ 11:18 PM Reply

looking thru your first few pages, then this, and I can see you actually got better.
I really like your black n white sketching, the octopus is win. keep it up yo!


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 19th, 2010 @ 11:35 PM Reply

At 11/19/10 11:18 PM, G-F-D wrote: looking thru your first few pages, then this, and I can see you actually got better.
I really like your black n white sketching, the octopus is win. keep it up yo!

Thanks man! It was all thanks to hard work and determination.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 19th, 2010 @ 11:43 PM Reply

At 11/18/10 07:50 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Reborn!

Quick! Use a deathperation shot!


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 20th, 2010 @ 02:11 PM Reply

At 11/19/10 11:43 PM, gmanthesandwhichking wrote: Quick! Use a deathperation shot!

Lol. Anyway, in loving memory of RobJonhson's AWESOME PIC.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. Nov. 20th, 2010 @ 02:14 PM Reply

I'm coloring my lovely octopus. I gotta put the stamp soon.

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