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Fifty-50's improved art.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-12 17:24:03


Photographic evidence.

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My Art Thread.

Eeureka! With an exclamation point!

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-12 23:49:16


At 11/12/10 05:24 PM, Luxembourg wrote: Photographic evidence.

Whoops!
When I first saw the image I thought his elbows were past each other, but looking back I see they're not. My mistake.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-12 23:59:26


At 11/12/10 02:22 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: The full body Wip I'm working on.
There is something seriously wrong with this picture. Take a guess?

The perspective on the card is off and his hat wouldnt stay on his head like that.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-13 00:01:47


At 11/12/10 02:22 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: The full body Wip I'm working on.
There is something seriously wrong with this picture. Take a guess?

Shoes are untied.


Who is the hunter?

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-13 00:05:30


whooboy, how much time a week you spand drawing man.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-13 00:22:33


At 11/13/10 12:05 AM, homojesus wrote: whooboy, how much time a week you spand drawing man. This was a test to see if the mistake was very noticeable.

I draw a lot of times. In school, in home everywhere. Anyway, maybe this could enlighten you.

Most of you got close, and the card was right too.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-13 03:30:40


The legs look too far apart to me based on how far away they are from the hips... but maybe I'm just tired.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-13 04:23:00


At 11/11/10 04:28 AM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 11/11/10 04:16 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Settled for a simpler background. *Art Portal*
Got a frontpage on this! AWESOME!!!!

FP was inevitable. Good job with the background, kinda bright/odd colour but still looks good.

" if you keep on practicing then you'll definently be god like on NG" ~CE, Dec. 19th 2009
At 11/13/10 12:05 AM, homojesus wrote: whooboy, how much time a week you spend drawing man.

That's because time spent practicing is roughly directly proportional to improvement.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-13 12:19:15


At 11/13/10 12:22 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Anyway, maybe this could enlighten you.

i said the arm was to long :P what do i win?

the pose still looks wierd, mostly cause his shoulders are pointed so far forward, and i know lux, it is possible, but is it comfortable or practical to use that pose?

its just me i know

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-14 09:45:32


At 11/13/10 04:23 AM, CloudEater wrote: FP was inevitable. Good job with the background, kinda bright/odd colour but still looks good.
" if you keep on practicing then you'll definently be god like on NG" ~CE, Dec. 19th 2009

I remember that when you said that to me. Good Times, Good Times Indeed. Looking back at my newsposts, I looked pitiful lol.

"Thank you Cloudeater for standing by me even though my artworks sucked like hell. Your a true friend"
At 11/13/10 12:19 PM, Ashman wrote: i said the arm was to long :P what do i win?

the pose still looks wierd, mostly cause his shoulders are pointed so far forward, and i know lux, it is possible, but is it comfortable or practical to use that pose?

Yeah, I'm pretty sure I draw the weirdest poses out there. If it was only Ashman who noticed, I guess it's good enough for Deviantart. It's not like they give out crits anyway.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-15 08:27:04


Tried my hand at realism.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-15 08:32:20


At 11/14/10 09:45 AM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 11/13/10 04:23 AM, CloudEater wrote:
" if you keep on practicing then you'll definently be god like on NG" ~CE, Dec. 19th 2009
I remember that when you said that to me. Good Times, Good Times Indeed. Looking back at my newsposts, I looked pitiful lol.

Definitely overestimated that time span though eh?
"3-4 years" has actually become <1 year.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-15 08:55:34


At 11/15/10 08:32 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Definitely overestimated that time span though eh?
"3-4 years" has actually become <1 year.

Yeah lol. The fact that I sucked made me want to be better.

Plus I've been rejected from the levels collab served as my inspiration.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-15 10:59:47


Green Line Collab.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-15 11:03:23


Original Line art.

I'm gonna color this.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-15 13:04:05


WIP

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-15 23:57:05


Done.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-16 00:05:44


perspective on the tanks a bit off and the anatomy on the big guy too, bro.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-16 00:09:49


At 11/16/10 12:05 AM, homojesus wrote: perspective on the tanks a bit off and the anatomy on the big guy too, bro

Yeah, I think dad is supposed to be like that, (I think) but your right about the tank there. I should have planned my sketches more. Oh well, there is much room for more improvement.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-16 04:26:26


Second Green Line Collab.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 04:20:28


My take on JAZZA's Larry

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 10:38:54


Coloring Larry

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 10:45:25


At 11/17/10 04:20 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: My take on JAZZA's Larry

On his right hand, his thumb is horribly disfigured. You made it into a finger, because you extended it and gave it an extra joint.
Also, the meat of the hand where the thumb connects to the palm shouldn't be so big.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 10:48:55


At 11/17/10 10:45 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: On his right hand, his thumb is horribly disfigured. You made it into a finger, because you extended it and gave it an extra joint.
Also, the meat of the hand where the thumb connects to the palm shouldn't be so big.

Looks like I need more fixing up. I'll fix it right away sire!


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 12:01:57


The problem is fixed Cap Jonny!

Quick! Is there anything more that looks strange?

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 12:25:59


At 11/17/10 12:01 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: The problem is fixed Cap Jonny!
Quick! Is there anything more that looks strange?

I think his right leg should be a bit higher... either that or he is basically standing with his ass pushed backwards... not really little knight-like


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 12:27:21


At 11/17/10 12:01 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: The problem is fixed Cap Jonny!
Quick! Is there anything more that looks strange?

Hrmm, it's better, but still looks a little off.
Take a look at this fist.
The thumb only has two joints as oppose to three in the rest of the fingers.
Also the thumb is much shorter, just meeting the middle of the middle finger.
The meat of the thumb is also not as thick, especially when gripping a weapon.

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 12:36:12


Lol Seeing everyone critique his art I'm like D: "but he's so much better than I am!!" I take one look and I'm in awe, I can't find mistakes until someone points them out. <.<

Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 12:38:35


At 11/17/10 12:25 PM, J-qb wrote: I think his right leg should be a bit higher... either that or he is basically standing with his ass pushed backwards... not really little knight-like

Will do sir! I'll fix it! Surgery complete.

It's pretty hard to do these adjustments, considering I only work with a mouse, but I'll take it as a challange.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-11-17 12:51:26


At 11/17/10 12:38 PM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 11/17/10 12:25 PM, J-qb wrote: I think his right leg should be a bit higher... either that or he is basically standing with his ass pushed backwards... not really little knight-like
Will do sir! I'll fix it! Surgery complete.
It's pretty hard to do these adjustments, considering I only work with a mouse, but I'll take it as a challange.

I meant that it should meet his torso a bit higher; I also think his upper arm is bit thin, and the sword hilt is off-center.
Made a paintover (also redrew the thumb)

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