I don't see what's wrong. The video was made very well, the story had gone on for the whole first episdoes without turning gay, and the characters act pretty close to how they've been depicted.
In fact, I actually liked that first part, and am interested enough to watch the rest of it in, say, tomorrow perhaps.
However, the liberal use of the song "His World" was a little annoying. There are plenty of decent Sonic songs out there, not just this one.
