Something I Wrote

[CarlHester]

I dont know whether you could say this is techniquly Art but its something i created so :)

Shes Like A Star
But Shes Not That Far
Away, She Makes My Day
When She Smiles At Me
And I Can See How Beautiful She is
But The Thing Is I Haven't Got
A Chance
Got Better Odds Swimming To France
But All I Need Is A Throne
Because I Found My Queen
The Girl I Want To Take Home
And When She Says Hi
It Takes Me By Suprise
Takes My Breath Away Feel Like a Could Die
And If She Was My Girl,
Then She Would Mean The World

© Copyright Carl Hester

Like It, Love It, Or Hate It.

[JustJoshy]

yeah more of a case of the wrong thread. should check the rules dude

[Lundsfryd]

At 10/14/09 07:20 PM, CarlHester wrote: I dont know whether you could say this is techniquly Art but its something i created so :)

Shes Like A Star
But Shes Not That Far
Away, She Makes My Day
When She Smiles At Me
And I Can See How Beautiful She is
But The Thing Is I Haven't Got
A Chance
Got Better Odds Swimming To France
But All I Need Is A Throne
Because I Found My Queen
The Girl I Want To Take Home
And When She Says Hi
It Takes Me By Suprise
Takes My Breath Away Feel Like a Could Die
And If She Was My Girl,
Then She Would Mean The World

© Copyright Carl Hester

Like It, Love It, Or Hate It.

Im not going to rant as much about the rules as I am going to lol at that copyright sign XD
Anyways, good luck with getting the girl and all but please.. Heave away..

[CarlHester]

naa ive got the girl lol , but ive just been sat there on my arse and words and sentences just come up and kinda make sense to me , so i put them together and just wrote that

if your interested i could put some more up that arnt as loved up :D

[bigjonny13]

You've obviously missed what everyone has been hinting at.
This is a VISUAL art forum. Go post your poem on your userpage or in the general forum.

[BlackmarketKraig]

What Big-J said. We're a forum for visual arts exclusively, thanks.