Flashwarrior draws some stuufffffff

[flashwarrior]

Here i goooo

[flashwarrior]

Looks like I need to work on it if I ever want to make something groovy look good.

or not use the pencil tool

[E-YeahStudios]

At 10/9/09 04:43 PM, flashwarrior wrote: Here i goooo

Not bad. I love the logo and words exspecially. Dad 'n dead me look odd though, as if they were beveled in flash. Try to fix that perhaps?

[J-qb]

At 10/9/09 06:54 PM, E-YeahStudios wrote: Not bad. I love the logo and words exspecially. Dad 'n dead me look odd though, as if they were beveled in flash. Try to fix that perhaps?

some explanation on that shading: It looks beveled because you only shaded the edges. on a round object (like an arm, ar basically any body part) the shading should resemble a gradient from one side to the other. now it looks like the middle is flat (no color change).

[hdxmike]

If youve played dad n me then you should know that his son has quite a lot of upper body muscle and small legs .

Also , gradient your shading more right now it looks like 2 minutes of bezel filtering in flash

[JoeTheToucan]

At 10/10/09 08:58 AM, hdxmike wrote:
Also , gradient your shading more right now it looks like 2 minutes of bezel filtering in flash

And you would know, as your 'art' is much better than his. Especially the shading.

text sarcasm

[M-Vero]

At 10/9/09 04:43 PM, flashwarrior wrote: Here i goooo

You gotta work on your shading, there isn't enough of it and it's inconsistent, I can't tell where the light's coming from. It's also kinda rough, like on dad's right (his left) shoulder it's very bumpy, doesn't look nice.

[flashwarrior]

At 10/10/09 12:23 PM, M-Vero wrote:

At 10/9/09 04:43 PM, flashwarrior wrote: Here i goooo

You gotta work on your shading, there isn't enough of it and it's inconsistent, I can't tell where the light's coming from. It's also kinda rough, like on dad's right (his left) shoulder it's very bumpy, doesn't look nice.

yeah, I realized how fucking shit my shading looked in that picture once i finished, but I liked the idea better than the drawing itself so I decided it was decent enough to post.

[hdxmike]

At 10/10/09 09:18 AM, JoeTheToucan wrote:

At 10/10/09 08:58 AM, hdxmike wrote:
Also , gradient your shading more right now it looks like 2 minutes of bezel filtering in flash

And you would know, as your 'art' is much better than his. Especially the shading.

text sarcasm

3 things

1.A lot of people seem to agree on the shading issue
2.Because im a starter at art im not entitled to my opinion?
3.Please link me to your 'art' thread

[JoeTheToucan]

At 10/10/09 03:04 PM, hdxmike wrote: 1.A lot of people seem to agree on the shading issue

indeed

2.Because im a starter at art im not entitled to my opinion?

Not when you know nothing of what you're giving advice on, and when you in fact, requested assistance with yourself. You can't be an English teacher when you don't know how to speak English.

3.Please link me to your 'art' thread

Paw through my bbs posts like the foreign mongrel you are, I'm sure the amid the pages and pages of text-based genius, the last serious illustration I created rapes all of yours combined with a powerful hoover.

[ScorpianX0]

At 10/10/09 05:21 PM, JoeTheToucan wrote:

At 10/10/09 03:04 PM, hdxmike wrote: 1.A lot of people seem to agree on the shading issue

indeed

2.Because im a starter at art im not entitled to my opinion?

Not when you know nothing of what you're giving advice on, and when you in fact, requested assistance with yourself. You can't be an English teacher when you don't know how to speak English.

3.Please link me to your 'art' thread

Paw through my bbs posts like the foreign mongrel you are, I'm sure the amid the pages and pages of text-based genius, the last serious illustration I created rapes all of yours combined with a powerful hoover.

2: Just because assistance is requested, it doesn't mean they don't know anything about the subject ( If I draw a car, Anyone could tell me if it actually looked like a car or not, or if the car looked odd... it doesn't take an artist to critque ), they're simply asking so they may become better.

3: keep your art and you ego off the subject of this thread. It was Created so that someone's art could be showcased for people to view and file their judgment on it, to help on whatever may be their shortcomings.

ok, time for actual post

I agree about the topic of the shading much like everyone else, but I also think you need to show more anatomy. Sure, they're cartoony, But they both have a Muscle build that should be emphasised ( spellcheck ) more. Also, It would look better with some sort of Gradient in the BG, besides just pitch black.

[JoeTheToucan]

At 10/10/09 05:57 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: furfaggotry

STAY OUT OF THIS YOU MEAT-HEADED YIFFSACK, NO-ONE ASKED ABOUT DIGIMON NO THEY DID NOT

-The boy asked for it, I didn't exactly flaunt it in this fellas thread for all to see. I don't feel anyone needs to witness a compilation of my art as I am progressing fine without the words of newgrounders, helpful as they may be.
And his art is utter fail. End of. My ego is a pink rabbit. I say it as it is. I'm a great bastard.
-I know what it is, when shitty artists are so rubbish that they like to sound like an experienced and "higher" artist when criticizing others so that they may attain a false sense of worth at being any good themselves, despite being far from truth and intentionally deluded. You may discard this as ridiculous as would this chap I'm bollocking, but I know it's a subconscious if not blatant intent at trying to sound the better man. Just look at his sig. Throwing together all the things he DABBLES in but is not any good at all at, in an attempt to sound like a proper worth-knowing person. PAH
-This may seem a lot over nothing, but I've seen this a lot and it gets on me tits. A lot. As you see.

-so this isn't ALL a load of shit about a twat,
I think the starting image is an interesting and cool concept but needs polishing a tad, being less rough. I'd like to see more stuff from you.

[ScorpianX0]

At 10/10/09 06:37 PM, JoeTheToucan wrote: Furry Insults, whining, other shit

See Folks... this is exactly what I meant |D. Nobody wants this in their thread.

JoetheToucan, that is why I SENT YOU A PM FOR MY RESPONSE TO THIS... Which is what you should've done

unless you did it for the attention you claim you don't need or want

[Hellknight1000]

At 10/10/09 06:37 PM, JoeTheToucan wrote: STAY OUT OF THIS YOU MEAT-HEADED YIFFSACK, NO-ONE ASKED ABOUT DIGIMON NO THEY DID NOT

MAJOR FACEPALM

You're a fucking idiot. XD

[g-kwan155]

I believe that you have some promising designs. All you have to do is get better with your computer tools. I mean shit I suck ass with computer stuff, but you're not too bad.

Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes.

[JoeTheToucan]

At 10/10/09 08:52 PM, Hellknight1000 wrote: MAJOR FACEPALM

You're a fucking idiot. XD

*Thumbs up*

[MindChamber]

lol, shitty art like this doesn't deserve such heated debates.