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Posted at: 9/23/09 12:59 PM
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But I can't seem to find what it could be... I'm not talking about the body, or the wings, it's something to do with the head. Any help? And possibly look at my other stuff I already have on my profile. Thanks. (:
And if you help me, I might be able to give a few suggestions on your stuff.
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Posted at: 9/23/09 01:03 PM
I also worked off another photo with the same intentions of making it into a fairy. But I left it be, since the face turned out much more correct.
Posted at: 9/23/09 01:15 PM
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At 9/23/09 12:59 PM, dreamzmighty wrote: But I can't seem to find what it could be... I'm not talking about the body, or the wings, it's something to do with the head. Any help? And possibly look at my other stuff I already have on my profile. Thanks. (: And if you help me, I might be able to give a few suggestions on your stuff.
she has a beard? The face is pretty off, but maybe that's because I'm not exactly sure how the body is shaped.
I find amputees quite sexy
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Posted at: 9/23/09 01:31 PM
At 9/23/09 01:15 PM, Fleshlight wrote: At 9/23/09 12:59 PM, dreamzmighty wrote: But I can't seem to find what it could be... I'm not talking about the body, or the wings, it's something to do with the head. Any help? And possibly look at my other stuff I already have on my profile. Thanks. (: And if you help me, I might be able to give a few suggestions on your stuff.she has a beard? The face is pretty off, but maybe that's because I'm not exactly sure how the body is shaped. I also worked off another photo with the same intentions of making it into a fairy. But I left it be, since the face turned out much more correct.I find amputees quite sexy
Hah hah. That's a hand covering her face in the first one. And her arms are up in the second one. Just because it won't look as freeky if I didn't add those details, I still do! 0: I'd LIKE to blame the quality, but I really didn't put the lines down solid enough. \: My bad.
Posted at: 9/23/09 04:00 PM
I would appreciate more critique. (:
Posted at: 9/23/09 04:32 PM
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Yeah, she looks like a bearded fairy...
And I do believe it needs more nudity :)
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Posted at: 9/23/09 04:44 PM
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At 9/23/09 04:00 PM, dreamzmighty wrote: I would appreciate more critique. (:
tryed inking? i think it would suit your drawing style. you might also wanna try messing with perspective a bit, its not that your drawing are flat or anything like that. its just in general you cant have enough perspective.
Posted at: 9/23/09 05:11 PM
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At 9/23/09 04:44 PM, Dahakka wrote: At 9/23/09 04:00 PM, dreamzmighty wrote: I would appreciate more critique. (:tryed inking?
Inking usually doesn't make up for bad anatomy unless you go down that "oh this is artsy ignore the scribbles" road.
As for the first picture, i think it's the head and the torso that's messing with it. Her neck is sitting on the far shoulder, as opposed to the center of the spine. And... There's no ribcage. Torsos tend to curve a bit.
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Posted at: 9/23/09 05:31 PM
tryed inking?
i was thinking more about getting used to using single clean lines instead of the sketchy style, it cleans up pictures alot and makes you think more about the shapes of objects.
Posted at: 9/23/09 06:24 PM
At 9/23/09 05:31 PM, Dahakka wrote: tryed inking?i was thinking more about getting used to using single clean lines instead of the sketchy style, it cleans up pictures alot and makes you think more about the shapes of objects.
I'm really not a cartoonist, yes. The first one is pretty much a cartoon. But I feel like lines can break a piece. Especially if you can't already tell what it is you're looking at.
Posted at: 9/23/09 06:27 PM
At 9/23/09 05:11 PM, kernalphage wrote: At 9/23/09 04:44 PM, Dahakka wrote: At 9/23/09 04:00 PM, dreamzmighty wrote: I would appreciate more critique. (:tryed inking?Inking usually doesn't make up for bad anatomy unless you go down that "oh this is artsy ignore the scribbles" road. As for the first picture, i think it's the head and the torso that's messing with it. Her neck is sitting on the far shoulder, as opposed to the center of the spine. And... There's no ribcage. Torsos tend to curve a bit.
I was working off of a photo. And I hope you're not saying I have terrible anatomy, though I know it is off. I suppose I should completely retry drawing the head portion. And I know there's no ribcage, but -ahem- The person in the photo isn't the thinnest, I wasn't avoiding drawing that detail, it just wasn't showing.
Posted at: 9/23/09 06:31 PM
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id get rid of the hand over the face. maybe if the lines were more solid and it was colored it would be clearer, but for that type of drawing i think itd be easier to be easier ya know? 8]
Posted at: 9/23/09 06:41 PM
Thank you very much kind sir! :'D
I was actually thinking the same thing... But I'm not good at making up things. Especially side faces... But, it wouldn't hurt to try. I'm almost thinking it's the hair on the head that makes it look funny though... But i"m not sure.
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