Forum Topic: Create a short story in 20 words.

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Posted at: 9/19/09 12:19 AM

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At 9/18/09 11:51 PM, Chillee wrote:
At 9/18/09 11:49 PM, chubbthehippo wrote:
At 9/18/09 11:20 PM, Chillee wrote:
Well actually, I didn't really have my sights set out to troll. I could take it that way once OP gets back but really I was raging just as hard as he was bawwing. Would suck if OP turned out to be troll.

So don't call it trolling, nothing close.
You're getting flamed as much as he is.
Anyways, nevermind.

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Long black wavy hair covering his eyes, hunched over, smoke escaping slowly as he breathes out, he continues his work.

20 words.

BAM!

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At 10/23/09 10:56 PM, PinballWizard976 wrote: Long black wavy hair covering his eyes, hunched over, smoke escaping slowly as he breathes out, he continues his work.

20 words.

BAM!

As the hair covered his eyes, a young, sexy woman glanced over at him, only to kick his sexy ass.

20 words.

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He jumped off a cliff.He survived,but with only half a brain left

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At 10/23/09 10:56 PM, PinballWizard976 wrote: Long black wavy hair covering his eyes, hunched over, smoke escaping slowly as he breathes out, he continues his work.

20 words.

BAM!

That isn't a story.


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I stepped outside. The world was a wasteland, ravaged by nuclear war. The stupid game then froze up. God damnit.

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At 10/23/09 11:01 PM, Major-Blood wrote:
At 10/23/09 10:56 PM, PinballWizard976 wrote: Long black wavy hair covering his eyes, hunched over, smoke escaping slowly as he breathes out,
As the hair covered his eyes, a young, sexy woman glanced over at him, only to kick his sexy ass.

He got rock hard because he was into kinky shit, and began to roughly undress her, with dirty, dirty intention.

20 words.

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At 10/23/09 11:34 PM, Yorik wrote:
At 10/23/09 10:56 PM, PinballWizard976 wrote: Long black wavy hair covering his eyes, hunched over, smoke escaping slowly as he breathes out, he continues his work.

20 words.

BAM!
That isn't a story.

Screw you buddy, it is to. It tells of how a person looks like, and that they continued their work. The rest of it is up to you to decide. There's something called sketch poetry, which gives you very little about what's going on, and leaves the rest of the story to you. Personally, I think of some guy hunched over in a shady bar, with long black wavy hair over his eyes, baggy clothes, hunched over at a table in the corner, smoking only because it helps him relax, and is using a bottle of ink and a quill; because he finds it easier to write that way. Maybe he doesn't have a home, so he come there to write, and he finds everyone else there annoying and close-minded about everything. But maybe he knows the bartender who lets him sleep and write there. Maybe he has brilliant ideas in his head but nobody will ever pay him any attention and they miss out on his opinions on very important things. But it could be something totally different. It's just what you make out of it. This is just what I thought of when I read my own thing a few hours later after I forgot about what I wrote. I love exercises like this. You can really get a good idea from it.

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I let out a barely audible yawn as I awoke from my slumber to an alarm clock ringing with glee. "I hate Monday mornings..." I muttered to myself while stumbling around looking for some clothes to wear. Still half-awake not fully ready for the day I lug myself into the shower and feel a blast from the initial cold then hot water. Drying myself off while examining myself in the mirror noting my less than admirable penis size; I was a full three inches when erect not nearly enough to satisfy any woman. All dressed up, for the struggles that lie ahead, I hesitantly slid into the BMW's seats admiring the interior for a moment with dreams of owning one myself some day I turned the key and took off.

When I arrived at the office I was greeted by a roomful of nameless business people just drinking their coffee keeping on with the daily tasks. I settled myself into my cubicle and let out a sigh; I was not ready to face the work that would ensue or the four o' clock meeting with my boss. I started sipping my coffee as the computer was warming up making it's familiar buzzing sound I grew dreadful of.

Sipping my coffee and typing away at some spreadsheet for some big company I thought to myself, "I hate this shit; I do all the dirty work and get no recognition. Fuck it I'm quitting." "I'm quitting," I told myself this a million times already, but I just don't have the balls to tell my boss that I am sick of this bullshit. I just keep working away like the faceless no-named business man I was. "This is how my life is going to be until I die," I muttered to myself while noticing the ever approaching four o' clock meeting.

I grasped the cold steel door handle and swung it open with a feeling of dread as I saw my boss sitting at one end of the table in his black leather chair. I took a seat at the opposite end of the table I had such a hatred for that five foot brown haired man. He opened his mouth and I just wanted to shove my fist directly into the back of his throat; "John, do you know why I called you to this meeting?" He said. I replied quickly with a stern, "No." He said, "I want to fuck you, John." I was shocked he'd be so open yet it left me with feelings of arousal so I replied with a hesitant, "Um, I suppose there is a first time for everything?" I was then struck with a sudden fear that he'd see my small penis and get turned off which would lead to the termination of my employment; even though I wanted to quit I couldn't I need this job.

He started kissing me softly on my neck leaving a little puddle of saliva from each kiss; while kissing me he slowly started unbuttoning my shirt. My shirt fell from my body with grace and elegance he slowly moved down my body going from my neck to my navel while my unbuttoned pants drop to my ankles. My boxers got caught with my pants and were sitting at my ankles I stepped out of them showing my full three inches in all it's glory. He gazed at my erect penis, it was dripping with pre-cum, and he smiled and said, "I was hoping it wouldn't be too big." I felt relief and stared at him still fully clothed; he quickly undressed knowing what I wanted. His cock was large I want to say eight inches then he slowly got to his knees with a grin on his face.

He stuck out his tongue and slowly slurped the pre-cum of the tip of my erect penis. I shivered a little bit it felt good it was a feeling I definitely wasn't used to. He then slowly started licking my shaft while playing with the head between his fingers. He started to engulf my penis into the depths of his throat; I realized I couldn't hold out much longer. My cum exploded into his throat with it's salty warmness and I could feel him swallowing as his entire mouth and throat tensed up. He slowly pulled my penis out his mouth licking any extra drops that might have escaped. I went flaccid instantly and knew it was my turn to service him. He said, "I want to fuck you in the ass." I slowly bent down and rested my hands on the table in front of me while he slowly slid his un-lubed penis into my rectum. It was quite painful and I started to bleed which made it slide in easier it was my own natural lube. In a matter of seconds he was pounding my ass with a fierce force that split my ass wide open. I was bleeding badly and it felt so good the blood trickled down my legs.

It continued like this for a solid thirty seconds and then he came deep inside of my large intestines. I proceeded to push the semen out which he lapped up like a dog. We both relaxed for five minutes reflecting on the magic that just occurred. We then proceeded to put our clothes on and I asked him, "Did you want anything else, Boss?" He said, "Nah, I'm good, but please call me Seymour." I headed for the door and slowly walked out before being stopped by Seymour by telling me I got a raise. I smiled and walked out muttering to myself, "I love this job..." I spent the rest of the day sitting in my cubicle feeling the blood on my leg it constantly reminded me of the acts that took place behind those doors oh how I longed to have another meeting with my boss.

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