"The Newgrounders"

[fryman94]

is the new novel i made, though i made only the prologue.

here's the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5360582/1/Th e_Newgrounders

[Presidentjlh]

At 9/7/09 08:47 PM, fryman94 wrote: is the new novel i made, though i made only the prologue.

here's the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5360582/1/Th e_Newgrounders

Hmmm...it shows potential...

lol, just kidding, its garbage.

[S3ns]

Sensationalism better be in that story.

[Kanaju]

Can't say it was good or bad. But I will tell you this: I'm waiting for more.

[LDAF]

Best.Story.EVAR. I want to see more, and I command you to upload it to the Lit Portal coming out in 4-7 (?) years.

[StrangelyMauled]

The introduction makes it sound the exact same as it is now. (filthy)

[VespeneGas]

How is two or three paragraphs a novel?

Also, the line "pieces of doomed clocks" is just poetic as hell man. Real deep shit.

[Lamar537]

Can I be in it? I can be the communist that tries to gain a foothold over newgrounds but fails in the end.

[Slain]

I think that putting me in it would be a wondrous addition.
I could be the... dildo wielding hero.

[Entice]

Meh. Worse writings have been published.

But not many.

Put me in it just for fun.

[fryman94]

and there will be more.

[Uchumaru08]

Put me in it or i'll chop off ur ballsshack

not really include meh pl0x ty roflmao!!!11111oneoneoneoneoneoneoneoneo ne

[fryman94]

At 9/7/09 10:19 PM, VespeneGas wrote: How is two or three paragraphs a novel?

Also, the line "pieces of doomed clocks" is just poetic as hell man. Real deep shit.

i suposse that you didn't read this:

"i made only the prologue"

Beat that.

[fryman94]

At 9/7/09 09:50 PM, LDAF wrote: Best.Story.EVAR. I want to see more, and I command you to upload it to the Lit Portal coming out in 4-7 (?) years.

thanks, and it's only beginning.

[GoronMaster]

I agree shows potential but could be better put in a video.

[linkrocker]

At 9/7/09 10:19 PM, VespeneGas wrote: How is two or three paragraphs a novel?

Also, the line "pieces of doomed clocks" is just poetic as hell man. Real deep shit.

He did say he only wrote the prologue.

[WeHaveFreshCookies]

If a novel of NG is made, I must be in it.

No exceptions.

[fryman94]

the Newgrounders chapter one is out!!!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/s tory_preview.php?storyid=5392462&chapter =2/

comments here plz

[Stretchysumo]

At 9/21/09 05:24 PM, fryman94 wrote: the Newgrounders chapter one is out!!!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/s tory_preview.php?storyid=5392462&chapter =2/

comments here plz

I must be logged in to see it. Hmm, mind copy/pasting to your userpage?

[fryman94]

At 9/21/09 05:24 PM, fryman94 wrote: the Newgrounders chapter one is out!!!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/s tory_preview.php?storyid=5392462&chapter =2/

comments here plz

also, the new link for the prologue is here: http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/s tory_preview.php?storyid=5392462&chapter =1/

[PWJP]

not bad. it's much better than half the stuff i've seen. i'll be waiting to see more.
also, add me pluz :3

[DumbassDude]

At 9/8/09 08:12 PM, WeHaveFreshCookies wrote: If a novel of NG is made, I must be in it.

No exceptions.

A novel without me is not to be considered a novel at all.

[Onizero]

Did you delete it or something? It's not showing when I click the link.

[Drake]

At 9/21/09 05:26 PM, Stretchysumo wrote:

At 9/21/09 05:24 PM, fryman94 wrote: the Newgrounders chapter one is out!!!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/s tory_preview.php?storyid=5392462&chapter =2/

comments here plz

I must be logged in to see it. Hmm, mind copy/pasting to your userpage?

Seconded, I'm not gonna sigh up to fanfiction.net and not use the account anymore.

[fryman94]

ok the links were wrong. Here are the correct ones:
prologue:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/539 2462/1/The_Newgrounders
chapter one:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5392462/
2/The_Newgrounders

[fryman94]

At 9/21/09 05:30 PM, Onizero wrote: Did you delete it or something? It's not showing when I click the link.

i posted the new links now

[MyGuitarSticks]

I'm not clicking on any link with the word with 'fanfiction' in it.

[fryman94]

also, i included some users that posted here

but when in the story are turned to clocks, i changed the names to fit the "clock" word in their names.

[Coleco]

At 9/7/09 10:19 PM, VespeneGas wrote: How is two or three paragraphs a novel?

Also, the line "pieces of doomed clocks" is just poetic as hell man. Real deep shit.

He did say prologue.

[JKMonkey]

cool story bro, definitely make some more

can't wait to see it