I think you put the eyes on your characters a bit too high.
Better than my doodles though ...
At 3/23/10 04:44 PM, Ashman wrote: horror ooohh
The bottom row of teeth should be completely coated in blood, that's what the bloody drool tells me.
crab people.....crab people
failed attempt at a super zero
At 3/25/10 03:03 PM, Ashman wrote: crab people.....crab people
Taste like crab, talk like people
gah why cant i get frikkin anatomy right, iv tried everything
At 3/25/10 03:35 PM, Ashman wrote: gah why cant i get frikkin anatomy right, iv tried everything
well the first thing is always the underlying skeleton. That it's self will solve a lot of common anatomy issues.
From looking at this, your beyond that point, and are to the point where practice is the medicine you need.
So go look up some porn... er I mean "Reference" and just practice.
Also a minor issue is the straight on pose you have going. The pose is bland so anatomical mistakes are much easier to see (and noticeable by the artist,) perhaps you should try a more complicated pose. unless you are building a character sheet for future reference. In that case some guide lines on the page, will help you out.
At 3/25/10 04:04 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:At 3/25/10 03:35 PM, Ashman wrote: gah why cant i get frikkin anatomy right, iv tried everythingwell the first thing is always the underlying skeleton. That it's self will solve a lot of common anatomy issues.
From looking at this, your beyond that point, and are to the point where practice is the medicine you need.
So go look up some porn... er I mean "Reference" and just practice.
Also a minor issue is the straight on pose you have going. The pose is bland so anatomical mistakes are much easier to see (and noticeable by the artist,) perhaps you should try a more complicated pose. unless you are building a character sheet for future reference. In that case some guide lines on the page, will help you out.
okey dokey kinsei, thats very helpful, iv been looking at tutorials for anatomy and skeletons, and so i guess all i need really is practice and new poses, i was using the straight on pose because its easiest i guess, but thanks, very helpful, now onto some other poses
one comment and its all the help i need, why the F dont other people help me
At 3/25/10 04:09 PM, Ashman wrote: okey dokey kinsei, thats very helpful, iv been looking at tutorials for anatomy and skeletons, and so i guess all i need really is practice and new poses, i was using the straight on pose because its easiest i guess, but thanks, very helpful, now onto some other poses
Lines isn't something that a lot know about to be honest. but as for a straight on pose being the easiest pose.... that is actually a no.... usually 3/4 is considered as such.
From an art stand point, straight on faces are considered ugly o.0.....
one comment and its all the help i need, why the F dont other people help me
because the world is a cold dark place, and were too cheap to turn on the heater >:3
At 3/25/10 04:13 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: Lines isn't something that a lot know about to be honest. but as for a straight on pose being the easiest pose.... that is actually a no.... usually 3/4 is considered as such.
From an art stand point, straight on faces are considered ugly o.0.....
wait 3/4 like slightly at an angle, for faces yeah thats easier, but for full body i find that hard, but hey back to the ol drawing board
is flat ground, kinda straight on something i should avoid aswell
At 3/25/10 04:19 PM, Ashman wrote: wait 3/4 like slightly at an angle, for faces yeah thats easier, but for full body i find that hard, but hey back to the ol drawing board
all practice I guess :P
is flat ground, kinda straight on something i should avoid aswell
well that all kind of depends on what you are intending it for.
for an Isometric piece, something hardly any of us do, the go for straight on but for just about everything else except for special circumstances you want to have a minor tilt to it. if for nothing else then to give the feel a better feel.
At 3/25/10 04:23 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:
for just about everything else except for special circumstances you want to have a minor tilt to it. if for nothing else then to give the feel a better feel.
this is the only part i understood but message recieved, mix up the poses, and viewer angle gotcha
Your drawing are horrible, everything about them is horrible please consider yourself stopping drawing.
all i see you are making excuses but no improvement, shit like this makes me sick, there alot better threads with alot more potential artists, and shit like this is on the first page?
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At 3/25/10 05:10 PM, majkas wrote: Your drawing are horrible, everything about them is horrible please consider yourself stopping drawing.
all i see you are making excuses but no improvement, shit like this makes me sick, there alot better threads with alot more potential artists, and shit like this is on the first page?
obvious troll is obvious...
Can we get a hand in here to delete these two post please?
Thanks in advance.
At 3/25/10 05:10 PM, majkas wrote: Your drawing are horrible, everything about them is horrible please consider yourself stopping drawing.
all i see you are making excuses but no improvement, shit like this makes me sick, there alot better threads with alot more potential artists, and shit like this is on the first page?
hahaha because i question you come over to my thread whining like a little bitch, dude seriously, the reason its on the first page is because people post in it retard, seriously post up some art then ill listen to what you have to say, at the moment your just some faggot troll with no art and no balls, good day
At 3/25/10 05:14 PM, Ashman wrote:At 3/25/10 05:10 PM, majkas wrote: Your drawing are horrible, everything about them is horrible please consider yourself stopping drawing.hahaha because i question you come over to my thread whining like a little bitch, dude seriously, the reason its on the first page is because people post in it retard, seriously post up some art then ill listen to what you have to say, at the moment your just some faggot troll with no art and no balls, good day
all i see you are making excuses but no improvement, shit like this makes me sick, there alot better threads with alot more potential artists, and shit like this is on the first page?
maybe you should just realize that you suck and just start sucking up criticism? im not whining im just stating my opinion :D check my older posts i don't spend much time on ng so i'm not going to bother scaning and posting my art.
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At 3/25/10 05:21 PM, majkas wrote:At 3/25/10 05:14 PM, Ashman wrote:maybe you should just realize that you suck and just start sucking up criticism? im not whining im just stating my opinion :D check my older posts i don't spend much time on ng so i'm not going to bother scaning and posting my art.At 3/25/10 05:10 PM, majkas wrote: Your drawing are horrible, everything about them is horrible please consider yourself stopping drawing.hahaha because i question you come over to my thread whining like a little bitch, dude seriously, the reason its on the first page is because people post in it retard, seriously post up some art then ill listen to what you have to say, at the moment your just some faggot troll with no art and no balls, good day
all i see you are making excuses but no improvement, shit like this makes me sick, there alot better threads with alot more potential artists, and shit like this is on the first page?
Criticism =/= flames.
You're obviously a douchebag. This is NOT criticism, this is bashing people's work. Criticism is telling people how they can get better. You're not doing that in any of the threads you're trolling; you're just pointing out everything you dislike.
You seem to expect people to start out awesome. People only get awesome by working hard. Saying "stop drawing" isn't constructive. It's downright mean-spirited.
I mean, come one, if you think a fantastic style like Vero's needs more realism, you must not know a whole lot about art. Realism =/= art.
Yes. I fed the troll. Watch him spit back at me! Great entertainment for the whole family.
At 3/25/10 05:21 PM, majkas wrote: maybe you should just realize that you suck and just start sucking up criticism? im not whining im just stating my opinion :D check my older posts i don't spend much time on ng so i'm not going to bother scaning and posting my art.
i know im a crap artist, no need to be a douche about it, if i ever got any criticism i would listen to it, im listening to kinsei and trying to improve but its guys like you that really dont help, your crit was of absolutely no help at all
At 3/25/10 05:25 PM, Ashman wrote:At 3/25/10 05:21 PM, majkas wrote: maybe you should just realize that you suck and just start sucking up criticism? im not whining im just stating my opinion :D check my older posts i don't spend much time on ng so i'm not going to bother scaning and posting my art.i know im a crap artist, no need to be a douche about it, if i ever got any criticism i would listen to it, im listening to kinsei and trying to improve but its guys like you that really dont help, your crit was of absolutely no help at all
:i know im a crap artist
so what the fuck do you want then, i told your art is crap and you know that your art is crap what the fuck is your problem then?
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oh and just to be helpfull you could start off here http://hippie.nu/~nocte/tutorial-current chapter/xhtml-chunked/index.html
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At 3/25/10 03:35 PM, Ashman wrote: gah why cant i get frikkin anatomy right, iv tried everything
because the way you sketched him out was kinda wonky :0
his arms are two short, no hips, and his feet are pretty big. other than though it doesn't look too bad :D
At 3/25/10 05:33 PM, majkas wrote: oh and just to be helpfull you could start off here http://hippie.nu/~nocte/tutorial-current chapter/xhtml-chunked/index.html
that was actually really helpful, even though it is a site for helping furrys, but the human anatomy stuff was really helpful thanks, its in my favourites now ill check all of it later
this is the result of 3 hours boredom in college lessons, full A4 sheet
At 3/29/10 06:38 PM, Ashman wrote: this is the result of 3 hours boredom in college lessons, full A4 sheet
I like it, very groovy.
At 3/29/10 06:38 PM, Ashman wrote: this is the result of 3 hours boredom in college lessons, full A4 sheet
I like it, very groovy.
At 3/29/10 06:41 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:At 3/29/10 06:38 PM, Ashman wrote: this is the result of 3 hours boredom in college lessons, full A4 sheetI like it, very groovy.
indeed, now for the kiwi for the super zero contest
look at the gimpy bastard
new style of work