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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 02:29 PM Reply

Of course i still have a lot of work, but this is the premise pretty much... if you didn't know the dad's of newgrounds have poker night. idk it's a little light hearted but by the time im done. im going to incorperate some characteristics from each persons flashes. (like behemoth dad's chainsaw) heres my crummy jpg version

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 03:38 PM Reply

At 9/6/09 02:29 PM, 00hotshot wrote: Of course i still have a lot of work, but this is the premise pretty much... if you didn't know the dad's of newgrounds have poker night. idk it's a little light hearted but by the time im done. im going to incorperate some characteristics from each persons flashes. (like behemoth dad's chainsaw) heres my crummy jpg version

the bottom of (purple) Dad`s chair is either underneath the table, or hovering a few inches above the ground


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 03:44 PM Reply

At 9/6/09 03:38 PM, J-qb wrote: the bottom of (purple) Dad`s chair is either underneath the table, or hovering a few inches above the ground

I think it should stay hovering. He needs a hovering chair.

But yeah, the idea is great behind the image. The image itself, like you said, could use a lot of work.


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 05:01 PM Reply

At 9/6/09 03:44 PM, Rhunyc wrote:
At 9/6/09 03:38 PM, J-qb wrote: the bottom of (purple) Dad`s chair is either underneath the table, or hovering a few inches above the ground
I think it should stay hovering. He needs a hovering chair.

But yeah, the idea is great behind the image. The image itself, like you said, could use a lot of work.

thanks guys, yeah it looks a lot better on paper i dont have a scanner or anything to show you what i'm working on my lappy. once i add the perspectives, shades and all that it'll look a lot better.


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 05:24 PM Reply

Nene has always been my favourite Newgrounds character.

Any comments or criticisms?

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 05:54 PM Reply

Fuck killerob, please delete his "less than filter whore" submissions


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 06:04 PM Reply

At 9/6/09 05:54 PM, Jarvid wrote: stuff

Now, now... everyone has the right to post their entry. Just because you don't like it doesn't mean someone else...somewhere in the cosmos... doesn't think it's amazing! (hi killerrobs mom!!)

Seeing some great stuff! I'd love to comment on some of it, but as a judge... that's not really fair. So, I'll just say... keep 'em coming!! :D

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 07:07 PM Reply

At 9/6/09 06:04 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:
I'd love to comment on some of it, but as a judge... that's not really fair

mods can be fair lol
this had to be in time with the start of school and college didnt it,im still workin on it when i get time so i should finish

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 07:16 PM Reply

Hey Guys Here's My Final Piece! :D
Any last Comments Before I Post This Fucker?
Sorry About The Quality Rape :(
Here's The High Quality Pic!!!!!

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 07:52 PM Reply

love it vylent

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 08:30 PM Reply

excellent work vylent!


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 08:33 PM Reply

At 9/6/09 05:24 PM, Aigis wrote: Nene has always been my favourite Newgrounds character.

Any comments or criticisms?

IMO

add something in the background to balance it out. (maybe her hanging)

love the style of it!


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 6th, 2009 @ 09:10 PM Reply

I like the cokjoke. I was working on my peice and after about an hour and a half or so had flash crash, i was drawing it up really large scale in flash, than transporting images into PS. BUT due to unknown errors i fail

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 01:52 AM Reply

added a little bit more in, tell me what ya think!

any ideas for background?

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 01:55 AM Reply

At 9/6/09 05:24 PM, Aigis wrote: Nene has always been my favourite Newgrounds character.

Any comments or criticisms?

I don't think the shape of the hand is entirely convincing, seeing as the picture has so few elements that you can really add detail to, I think you should do a little more work on making it look very good. Also nene doesn't cry =P


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 02:21 AM Reply

At 9/6/09 05:24 PM, Aigis wrote: Nene has always been my favourite Newgrounds character.

Any comments or criticisms?

this is better than I thought it would be after the first few wips....
I still think its a bit bland though... poeple will have to look at it for a full month, and while this would make an interesting shot (get it... shot) for a flash animation or something, as a standalone piece of art its a bit plain.


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 02:25 AM Reply

so about the nene piece again: maybe add more detail? I know its supposed to be simplistic, but its too simple right now. also maybe add something in that huge empty space in the upper left corner.

At 9/6/09 07:16 PM, vylent wrote: Hey Guys Here's My Final Piece! :D
Any last Comments Before I Post This Fucker?
Sorry About The Quality Rape :(
Here's The High Quality Pic!!!!!

Its great! but are those your own clouds?... tah tah tah


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 03:46 AM Reply

At 9/7/09 02:25 AM, J-qb wrote:
At 9/6/09 07:16 PM, vylent wrote: Hey Guys Here's My Final Piece! :D
Its great! but are those your own clouds?... tah tah tah

What j quib said. I reckon a simple cloud brush or wispy clouds would work better.

Love the colours and the inclusion of water reflections, btw.


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 03:49 AM Reply

At 9/7/09 02:25 AM, J-qb wrote:
At 9/6/09 07:16 PM, vylent wrote: Hey Guys Here's My Final Piece! :D
Any last Comments Before I Post This Fucker?
Sorry About The Quality Rape :(
Here's The High Quality Pic!!!!!
Its great! but are those your own clouds?... tah tah tah

hmm i was thinking the same J-qb

the quality of the clouds and the bubbles compared to the rendering of the water and the big blotched sun doesn't look right.

composition wise i like the simplicity but remove the sun, fix the clouds cause they don't match the rough solid rendering style on the sub AND you can see they're the same patch of cloud just copied. also the really strong blue rim light on the right side of the sub around the face kills the roundness.

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 05:40 AM Reply

At 9/6/09 05:27 PM, SteliosLP wrote: cant wait to see the final result and overall it looks effin awesome.

Thank you.

At 9/6/09 08:33 PM, 00hotshot wrote: IMO

add something in the background to balance it out. (maybe her hanging)

love the style of it!

Yes, it's still a work in progress. I don't know how I'm going to finish it off, though.

At 9/7/09 02:21 AM, J-qb wrote: this is better than I thought it would be after the first few wips....

Well, thank you for that.

I still think its a bit bland though... poeple will have to look at it for a full month, and while this would make an interesting shot (get it... shot) for a flash animation or something, as a standalone piece of art its a bit plain.

It's the sort of art that I like to see hanging on my walls, but that might just be me. I'm a very simple man.

At 9/7/09 01:55 AM, Coaly wrote: I don't think the shape of the hand is entirely convincing, seeing as the picture has so few elements that you can really add detail to, I think you should do a little more work on making it look very good. Also nene doesn't cry =P

I think I screwed up the perspective on the thumb and made it too long, which I've now corrected. Other than that, it looks pretty much like my hand.

Regarding the crying, it was really supposed to be a paint thing rather than tears, but Nene doesn't cry? What?

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 06:44 AM Reply

Thanks for the criticisms guys
Ill have a mess around with it and see what I can fix.
Thanks again.


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 12:05 PM Reply

This is my entry


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 12:12 PM Reply

At 9/7/09 12:05 PM, Show-R-Studios wrote: This is my entry

Id suggest having a little bit more contrast... everything seems to blend in with everything else at the moment, you want it to pop


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 12:14 PM Reply

Haha,yeah sorry, it didnt dowload for some reason, here is link too, High Quality

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 03:15 PM Reply

my WIP, this is taking more time than I expected :/

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 03:38 PM Reply

At 9/7/09 03:15 PM, Nekow wrote: my WIP, this is taking more time than I expected :/

so.. another red castle crasher then... its looking good


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 03:43 PM Reply

At 9/7/09 03:38 PM, J-qb wrote:
At 9/7/09 03:15 PM, Nekow wrote: my WIP, this is taking more time than I expected :/
so.. another red castle crasher then... its looking good

I'm doing all the crashers.. if I can make it in time of course

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 03:50 PM Reply

At 9/7/09 03:43 PM, Nekow wrote:
At 9/7/09 03:38 PM, J-qb wrote:
At 9/7/09 03:15 PM, Nekow wrote: my WIP, this is taking more time than I expected :/
so.. another red castle crasher then... its looking good
I'm doing all the crashers.. if I can make it in time of course

Yeah, I thought you were someone else, nevermind my comment, I thought there were now three of us making realistic castle crashers....


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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 05:23 PM Reply

Done and dusted.

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Response to [talk] Ng Print Calendar 2010 Sep. 7th, 2009 @ 08:54 PM Reply

Got a great idea for this now, just hope I can pull it off!

Is the month thing important?


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