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Posted at: 8/27/09 11:52 AM
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Right now, I am trying to touch up the details for the lineart. I am sorry for such a boring picture but I need to work on my ability to draw clothing, creases, and folds.
Posted at: 8/27/09 11:53 AM
NOTE: This isn't the lineart. Just in case there is any confusion.
Posted at: 8/27/09 12:01 PM
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i like what i see for once... legolass aproves *thumbs up*...
cant really comment on what i see at the moment... athough i love the eyes... i need to see more before i can give you comments on it... its to general at the moment...
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Posted at: 8/28/09 03:54 AM
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Although I say I don't like anime art, I'm partial to the semi-realistic type such as this. lookin' good mate.
Tits, the lot of yas.
Posted at: 8/28/09 05:23 AM
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Shit hot! ink that bad boy up and show me some colour!
Boooooosh!
Posted at: 8/28/09 09:57 AM
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it's ok, simple is good, the line of her face round the left eye is a bit off thoug. the cheekbone is right under the eye, and then the face should go in a bit at the eyes
hur,hur.
Posted at: 8/28/09 10:58 AM
At 8/28/09 09:57 AM, CosmicDebris wrote: it's ok, simple is good, the line of her face round the left eye is a bit off thoug. the cheekbone is right under the eye, and then the face should go in a bit at the eyes
Please provide a visual aid so I can make the corrections.
Posted at: 8/28/09 11:08 AM
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At 8/28/09 10:58 AM, Sahariel wrote: At 8/28/09 09:57 AM, CosmicDebris wrote: it's ok, simple is good, the line of her face round the left eye is a bit off thoug. the cheekbone is right under the eye, and then the face should go in a bit at the eyesPlease provide a visual aid so I can make the corrections.
Take a look at the left (her right) side of the face on this photo - http://morguefile.com/archive/?display=1 87523& Pay close attention to the contour of the face line. Notice that the cheekbone creates a curve just under her eyes. In your case the curve is much lower.
Art n' stuff :3
Posted at: 8/28/09 07:38 PM
At 8/28/09 11:08 AM, Re2deemer wrote: At 8/28/09 10:58 AM, Sahariel wrote: At 8/28/09 09:57 AM, CosmicDebris wrote: it's ok, simple is good, the line of her face round the left eye is a bit off thoug. the cheekbone is right under the eye, and then the face should go in a bit at the eyesPlease provide a visual aid so I can make the corrections.Take a look at the left (her right) side of the face on this photo - http://morguefile.com/archive/?display=1 87523& Pay close attention to the contour of the face line. Notice that the cheekbone creates a curve just under her eyes. In your case the curve is much lower.
Thank you very much for your time and for the reference.
I'll apply the fixes as soon as I daignose what exactly is wrong with my computer.
Posted at: 8/28/09 07:40 PM
*Diagnose
Any progress made on an edit button for when a poster makes a mistake?
Posted at: 8/29/09 03:28 AM
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At 8/28/09 07:40 PM, Sahariel wrote: *Diagnose Any progress made on an edit button for when a poster makes a mistake?
no
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Posted at: 8/29/09 09:26 PM
Ok, I have two versions of lineart in progress: one with the cartoonish outlines and one without.
Hair's gonna be a bitch though...
Anyways, which do you like better? I guess one thought was to tone down the length of the eyelashes. Looks a bit too...unrealistic.
I also resized one of the eyes.
One with eyelashes:
Posted at: 8/29/09 09:28 PM
And here is the one without:
Posted at: 8/29/09 09:34 PM
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At 8/29/09 09:28 PM, Sahariel wrote: And here is the one without:
I like the one without. But they're both really good. Nice job. Keep updating :D
Posted at: 8/30/09 05:08 AM
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I think I liked it more before without the lineart.
please, for the love of god ATTEMPT to read the art forum rules.
Posted at: 8/30/09 12:43 PM
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nice!
Posted at: 8/30/09 12:49 PM
Trying to decide whether the watercolors or the acryllics would work best. Either that or cell-shading or some form of soft-shading...
Posted at: 8/30/09 01:17 PM
At 8/30/09 12:49 PM, Sahariel wrote: Trying to decide whether the watercolors or the acryllics would work best. Either that or cell-shading or some form of soft-shading...
so basically you have no idea?
Posted at: 8/30/09 01:51 PM
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Although I'm not really that much into anime art I still think that's pretty damn good art there!
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Posted at: 8/30/09 01:59 PM
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This seemed to be a bit anime at first with the eyelashes, but no eyelashes isn't realistic either. They don't stick out only at the end, but run all across the top and shorter less defined eyelashes run on the lower eye lid. The drawing is progressing very well so far.
My art thread of awesomelocinous!
Posted at: 8/30/09 07:54 PM
At 8/30/09 01:59 PM, MegaMelmo wrote: This seemed to be a bit anime at first with the eyelashes, but no eyelashes isn't realistic either. They don't stick out only at the end, but run all across the top and shorter less defined eyelashes run on the lower eye lid. The drawing is progressing very well so far.
I got rid of the oversized eyelashes to prepare for more realistic ones. I am probably going to use this to experiment with coloring styles.
Posted at: 8/30/09 11:19 PM
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also, if you want to go for a more realistic piece, you may want to be sure to not draw the eyes and eyebrows over the hair. the hair should cover them
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Posted at: 8/30/09 11:51 PM
At 8/30/09 11:19 PM, Ani-x wrote: also, if you want to go for a more realistic piece, you may want to be sure to not draw the eyes and eyebrows over the hair. the hair should cover them
I know. That's the plan.
Posted at: 8/31/09 05:12 AM
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make the neck more fatty.
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