At 3/9/11 04:24 PM, pokapanxio wrote:
Mai Shiranui from TKOF
Holy Shit! Those are super hooters! She could probably use them to battle the enemies - no hands. I could just curl up between those and go to sleep. I mean... wow.
So we've established that you're pretty damn good at drawing bewbs, and faces to boot. Do have to say, thought, that the main things that you've got to work on, at least in this particular picture, would have to be composition, and her hands. The hands, because, well, they suck. The looked fairly scribbled, and while you definitely put the emphasis on those massive beacons of awesome, they do drag attention from the boobs, and that isn't cool. Thinks of the tits, man.
As for the background, do not be afraid to cut out a lot of the background elements if the focus is solely on the character - stylistic simplicity beats somewhat half-arsedness any day. I know that M-Vero uses little, cut-out backgrounds to great effect - just might want to see how it works.
Otherwise, good luck with the art!