A lot of spelling mistakes in the storyline, You should read through your story and check it for instance after beating the first level i got a text box saying
" Stop! I fell his presents. "
Which i assume was meant to say:
" Stop! I felt his presence."
Also the text speed to read the story was annoying. I was sat there just pressing Next to skip the sotry becasue i couldnt be bothered to wait for the text to appear.
If you get the text to appear all at once then keep the next button players can read at their leisure or just skip the story, then its up to them.
The scripting seems rather basic to me, the way the player attacks. i could just hold down the button and he'd attack endlessly without stopping. If you make it work like in Super Smash Bros with combos that would be nicer. Where you have to press a key within a certain frame of the animation to continue attacking.
The focus on the game seems more to the story line than to the actual playing of the levels as i found myself just continually running to the right, avoiding fighting the enemies because there was no point.
Can be improved quite a bit but good effort